My Created Weird Thing

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Post 3+ Months Ago

When it comes to digital drawing, I'm no expert. I have tried to create some things here on Ozzu and you know what I'm talking about :lol:

Here is my attempt at something at the margin of scary and funny :lol:

If someone doesn't know, my other hobby is writing stories and poems (Yup...) so right now I want to write a story on a scary side. I have created a little image for it... not sure where it's going to go but here it is. Has some transparency on it so I wonder how it would look on different colors...

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my one word of advice would be to take off some of the noise on the top lettering (the thing that says 'the new adventure' - at least I think that's what it says cuz it's a bit of a challenge to read :D) I like the Grim Reaper, he seems nicely jolly in a dead kind of way.
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Post 3+ Months Ago

Looks like Michael Jackson.
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celandine wrote:
my one word of advice would be to take off some of the noise on the top lettering (the thing that says 'the new adventure' - at least I think that's what it says cuz it's a bit of a challenge to read :D) I like the Grim Reaper, he seems nicely jolly in a dead kind of way.

Ok... I don't like that piece of text myself, I just decided to leave it until I get some review on it. Sure enough, here it is :D Thanks.

SB wrote:
Looks like Michael Jackson.

lol thanks.
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Post 3+ Months Ago

Shouldn't the text read: "The Governor is here" ... ?

have a look at this
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yeah I was gonna mention that but I forgot :D
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I was wondering why you of all people didn't notice that ... obviously you did ... lol ...
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I guess I was just thinking in terms of the visuals rather than the grammaticals.... :D
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Post 3+ Months Ago

I know, I know. I suck at spelling. :P

Thanks I will fix that... and thanks calendine for not being to critical :D

Any visual criticism would be great... well and grammatical too :P
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Post 3+ Months Ago

theres one thing you need to remember... althou there is many beldning options to get carried away with.. it gud to use them in moderation.. maybe a small light inner shadow.. small gental bevral.. light gradient... dont go crazy throw everything into one.
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Post 3+ Months Ago

I'm not a designer so I won't comment on that part Bogey, but I like the little guys expression.

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