How could i improve this logo?

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Post May 4th, 2007, 4:36 pm

I created this in fireworks, its for a home improvement website im creating for course work at college so as you can imagine im no expert. The thistle and colour skeam were given to me by the client so i have to really stick to them but im open to any ideas about how to improve it

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Post May 4th, 2007, 4:36 pm

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Post May 4th, 2007, 5:20 pm

I think if you did more to the actual text to make it stand out a bit more you could go quite far with it. The background is not bad being white, but i can't help but think there is something else needing done to it to make it more interesting.

Are you from Scotland? just thought it was quite nice seeing the Thistle on a graphic.
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Post May 5th, 2007, 5:24 pm

yeah across the bridge from you mate
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Post May 7th, 2007, 3:04 am

Yeah maybe just making the font bold and underlined or something like that, because that font is very narrow ...
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Post June 2nd, 2007, 4:51 pm

I would advise a strong drop shadow on the text, or a thin black stroke around it. Looks good though.
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Post June 2nd, 2007, 11:36 pm

Im not too sure if I like the gradient on the text. I think a solid color would look better. Or, maybe it's just that the light green is too light on such a thin font. Makes it a little hard to read on a light background.
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Post June 4th, 2007, 11:53 am

I drop down shadow would do fine or maybe a reflection.
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Post June 5th, 2007, 8:09 pm

Go with a reflections, with a gradual transparency, but if you do a reflection, don't use a drop shadow. Then with the reflection change the perspective to look like its coming toward you not just straight down.
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Post June 5th, 2007, 8:16 pm

Here just in case my discription was vague:

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See the reflections. Ahh...there they are. I was wrong about the perspective, I doesn't look right...well it could look right but that might take a while.
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Post June 22nd, 2007, 7:00 pm

I actually like it just the way it is.

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