How's this logo? Critique Please!

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Post January 4th, 2004, 8:03 pm

So this font's better?
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Post January 4th, 2004, 8:03 pm

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Post January 4th, 2004, 8:05 pm

Personally, I liked it either way.
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Post January 4th, 2004, 8:19 pm

Allrighty then. I've tweaked the logo part a little bit because it looked a bit plain. And came up with this! Is it too much?

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Post January 4th, 2004, 8:21 pm

mmm that looks good too, where you have outlined the logo in that aqua colour, with your colour picker in PS or whatever you using and pick out that darker blue colour from the background (the middle about the S&A in SAPID).

I think that would be cool :)
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Post January 4th, 2004, 8:31 pm

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Like so?? Erm..that's not much of a change is it? I don't seem to be able to use that color and make it visible at all because it blends in too much with the already-in-use background.
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Post January 4th, 2004, 8:34 pm

See the aqua lines around the STS logo? Instead of using that aquamarine coloured blue, use the same blue you have in the dark patch in the middle of the background image.

It would blend in a lot better.

I like the concept though. That cut out looks awesome :)
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Post January 4th, 2004, 8:40 pm

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That's with using color #315476, the darker blue in the little upside down-ice cream top thingy and in the Outer Glow blending option in photoshop.

I know it doesn't look like the color but that's the outer glow function gives me so I must listen to it because I know of no other way to achieve the effect.
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Post January 4th, 2004, 8:42 pm

It looks better now without the aqua blue. I'd say that is now a finished peice of artwork my friend :D
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Post January 4th, 2004, 8:44 pm

Thanks so much musik. You don't know how much I appreciate it. This has got to be the first decent piece of art I have made!
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Post January 4th, 2004, 8:45 pm

And may it be the first of many, many more!!! :D

Well done, it looks fantasic! :thumbsup:
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Post January 4th, 2004, 10:08 pm

none of the images showed for me :?
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Post January 5th, 2004, 8:15 am

It always seems that some people have trouble accessing my server (which happens to be my computer). Does anyone know of a free image service that I could use to make it visible to everyone?
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Post January 5th, 2004, 8:20 am

Ok. For Unflux :D. Do these show up?

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They are in order from the first post to last post with some in the middle skipped. If you want the rest, tell me and I'll get them up too.
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Post January 5th, 2004, 11:49 am

for colors, #2 is best. the logo is ok, i guess. maybe try to
come up with some variations on it. Font choices are ok, clean
and easy to read. Overall, I think the first one is best. I'm
diggin' the pixellation.
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Post January 5th, 2004, 2:17 pm

Hey Unflux, how'd you make your logo?
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