How's this logo? Critique Please!

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How's this logo? Critique please!!
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I like it but I am not too fond of the background. I think you could come up with something better - the logo is great though. :D
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i totally agree wiv musik ^ ^ ^
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Image How about this?
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It's not exactly bad, but it doesn't really grab attention. This one does not flow, it seems like you have tiled the background. Keep trying, it's always good to come up with a few variations and then you choose the one that really grabs your attention and suits your tastes :)
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Another variation. What arey ou exactly thinking of when you say something that grabs your attention??
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Something that doesn't look plain. Something interesting and unique. Also your link doesn't work :D

PS: I am not saying the ones you have done are no good :)
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Fixed it. And WOW you're fast.
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last one does not show up........ Change "the sapid stashs'" font that might help!
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Is that after or before you saw my last post? If it's after... that'd be weird because I fixed everything...
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I like that one much better :D

:thumbsup: great work!
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yeah i was a bit slow on the "it dont work"

Try a new font though
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How about this?
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I thought I posted a comment already but I think I closed the page before I pressed send :oops:

I really like this one! Much much better :D
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oh you changed your post. okay im not going crazy. :cukoo:
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So this font's better?
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Personally, I liked it either way.
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Allrighty then. I've tweaked the logo part a little bit because it looked a bit plain. And came up with this! Is it too much?

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mmm that looks good too, where you have outlined the logo in that aqua colour, with your colour picker in PS or whatever you using and pick out that darker blue colour from the background (the middle about the S&A in SAPID).

I think that would be cool :)
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Like so?? Erm..that's not much of a change is it? I don't seem to be able to use that color and make it visible at all because it blends in too much with the already-in-use background.
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See the aqua lines around the STS logo? Instead of using that aquamarine coloured blue, use the same blue you have in the dark patch in the middle of the background image.

It would blend in a lot better.

I like the concept though. That cut out looks awesome :)
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That's with using color #315476, the darker blue in the little upside down-ice cream top thingy and in the Outer Glow blending option in photoshop.

I know it doesn't look like the color but that's the outer glow function gives me so I must listen to it because I know of no other way to achieve the effect.
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It looks better now without the aqua blue. I'd say that is now a finished peice of artwork my friend :D
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Thanks so much musik. You don't know how much I appreciate it. This has got to be the first decent piece of art I have made!
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And may it be the first of many, many more!!! :D

Well done, it looks fantasic! :thumbsup:
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none of the images showed for me :?
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It always seems that some people have trouble accessing my server (which happens to be my computer). Does anyone know of a free image service that I could use to make it visible to everyone?
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Ok. For Unflux :D. Do these show up?

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They are in order from the first post to last post with some in the middle skipped. If you want the rest, tell me and I'll get them up too.
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for colors, #2 is best. the logo is ok, i guess. maybe try to
come up with some variations on it. Font choices are ok, clean
and easy to read. Overall, I think the first one is best. I'm
diggin' the pixellation.
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Hey Unflux, how'd you make your logo?
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