I think it sucks. What do you think? 1st Abstract Banner

I downloaded some new brushes and thought I'd try them out and do some abstract stuff or w/e this is what I got. Feedback please.

With that subject line, I'm not sure what kind of feedback you're looking for. Here goes nothing.

The back ground isn't really abstract - it's random. The two aren't the same.

The type is weak on the background, despite the stroke you added.

I'm not sure what else to tell you. *shrug*

I'm not trying to be negative, but it appears as if you didn't really spend any effort doing this.

Thought so . And I did spend a bit of time working on it.

Ok, sorry.

I think maybe the contrast is too much, you can choose colors which are more alike. Say, if you choose black, then try not to add white and vice versa. You can of course slightly add some colors(Just a little bit, I myself prefer blue range colors for abstract pictures...)

You can also draw on different layers and change the layers' blending mode/transparency and see how it will work

The overall thing looks nice, but the text does not stand out, and the averange user who isn't too interest will overlook it, make the text the center of attention. do this now.

Nothing really stands out about it. Just some downloaded brushes used poorly.