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http://img223.echo.cx/img223/1491/morni ... a016gv.png

//mod edit: sorry image was too large to display on site so I changed it to a link.

what you all pepoles Think?

this was made in maya
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Nice rendering. I find it has too much of a blue tint though.
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if light is supposed to be coming in from the windows then the inside of the bench is too bright...should there be shadow there?

in general the inside face of the bench is too bright to me.


I REALLY love the windows though....very smooth
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you right The bench is looking too bright i just notic that
i'll fix this.......
there is ashadow there under the table and where is the bench
thank you all for your comments iand if there is any thin that you think need improvement please tell me..
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Dosnt the image break Ozzu rules? It is too big for the screen. I have to scroll at the bottom to get the complete image and i am on a 1024x768 screen resolution.

Having said that, i agree with 613flavah the image is too blue.
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very nice render, one think I will add..there seems to be a little too much reflection on the floor and table. I know you want glossy, but that may be a tad too much, I almost expect to see fish jumping out of the floor.

Seeing how its a morning theme, it would add a whole lot to your render if you added a touch of light beaming in from outside, and perhaps add just a touch of fog in the scene to show it off.

Very nice, keep it up
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Vladdrac wrote:
very nice render, one think I will add..there seems to be a little too much reflection on the floor and table


this render was made in maya Default Render Mental Ray
and i just notic that this is bit to much i will fix this


Vladdrac wrote:

I almost expect to see fish jumping out of the floor.

hahaha.... :D


Vladdrac wrote:

Seeing how its a morning theme, it would add a whole lot to your render if you added a touch of light beaming in from outside, and perhaps add just a touch of fog in the scene to show it off.


i have Fog in the scene maybe i need to get higher Intensity


thank you very much.
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Quote:
this render was made in maya Default Render Mental Ray
and i just notic that this is bit to much i will fix this


You should be able to adjust the reflectivity in the material, mental ray is pretty powerful, 3ds max comes with it as well

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