corner park

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I took this photo today,
http://www.flickr.com/photos/26214166@N05/2480764232/

Do you like it?
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May it be an evening star
Shines down upon you
May it be when darkness falls
Your heart will be true
You walk a lonely road
Oh! How far you are from home

Mornie utĂșlie (darknesss has come)
Believe and you will find your way
Mornie alantie (darknesss has fallen)
A promise lives within you now

May it be the shadows call
Will fly away
May it be your journey on
To light the day
When the night is overcome
You may rise to find the sun

Mornie utĂșlie (darknesss has come)
Believe and you will find your way
Mornie alantie (darknesss has fallen)
A promise lives within you now

A promise lives within you now

Lyrics by Roma Ryan
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Post 3+ Months Ago

I think you are improving on the composition. Had you got a little bit more light on the cars (as in a longer exposure) then i think this would be a fantastic shot.

It's not bad though. Definitely a huge improvement on the earlier stuff.
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Post 3+ Months Ago

What do you mean by composition, Craig?

I can retake this shot later, it's near my house.
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Post 3+ Months Ago

Rather than having one focal point in one area of the photo and nothing else interesting to see, you've got a few.

The main focal point here is the tree in the center of the photo. The center is generally where people tend to look at first when looking at photos so automatically i see that as the main point of the photo. Yet, to the bottom left you've got the road with cars parked. Infact, your framing here is pretty good as you've got the road swinging from the left to the bottom. I guess you could further prove that this is indeed a corner park just for having that.

The light is great, and the general quality of the photo is good. It's nothing spectacular, but it's certainly a million times better than some of your earlier shots.
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I'll be the first to admit that sometimes silhouettes can be nice - but I think this picture could be alot better with a longer shutter speed.

This is just a simple mock up using levels adjustments in PS:
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I know the clipping in the trees could be better, but I didn't want to spend any time on it :P
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Thank you Craig so very much, you actually motivated me to take about a hundred shots just now, and..I will improve in time, please also view my Red Dragon I just posted in the Dragon head thread, I anticipate your comments,

and neksus, I really like your modifications, I'm photoshop retard, so it surprises me that how it can change the oroginal photo.

I will take another shot of it, later when i'm free, Hope to get more compliments :D

thanks to you, too

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