My new layout and some new pics

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http://www.flickr.com/photos/leow_photography/

1. Not a new one. Taken when I haven't started using a *more expensive camera. *p
2. Taken today, after receiving many reviews from ozzu, Thanks so much. Hope I've improved.
3. Again, hope I improved, taken today at the park. A very large beautiful park 7-8 kilometers away from home. *p
4. Same as no.3

That's about it. :) :)

Hope you enjoy it, I worked quite hard at those. :|


*more expensive camera - depends on who you are. To me, having a 10k to spend every 3 months is considered rich. I'm not.
*p stands for portraiture work.


Thank you for reviewing, suggestions are all welcome.

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Definetly improving there, sir. Have you looked into any compositional techniques (rule of thirds, triangular composition, etc)? Also, it looks like you got the wrong white balance on a couple of those shots.
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Did you do the cropping on your 4th photo or was that framed when you were taking the photo.

They look good, and there is a good use of depth of field. The white balance is very wrong, but in saying that i do kinda like the blue effect you have on both shots.
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digitalMedia wrote:
triangular composition

I'm not aware about this. I'd do a search to find out more, help from ozzu of course will be much appreciated. Thanks, I will work harder. I've read a page from a website about the rule of third - a link Mark(ATNO) sent to me and that was it. I haven't really studied it.

About the white, yeah it was my first experience changing that feature. Do you mean without the blue look will be better?
Thank you, thank you. DM. :)

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Did you do the cropping on your 4th photo or was that framed when you were taking the photo.

That was 100% framing while taking that photo. I refused to crop or change any of my photos except turning it vertically.

Were you going to say the framing was not so right, either?
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The white balance is very wrong

Thanks for the feedback. I'd appreciate how if you'd advice / suggest I should be doing the white.

But the first one I cropped. That was when I haven't started really learning about photography.

Thank you, as always to you, Craig. :)
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No no, the cropping in the 4th photo is really really good.
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Looks like Tungsten :P
I like the fourth one best, too :)
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Thank you very much, really.

@neksus, Tungsten? Not sure where you get me there... :)
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SB wrote:
No no, the cropping in the 4th photo is really really good.


:lol:

Please excuse me, whilst that appeared as a compliment if you were anal enough then you'd see that somehow i regarded your framing as cropping. So, i shall rephrase...

"No no, the framing in the 4th photo is really really good."

I feel a tiny bit better now.
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George L. wrote:
@neksus, Tungsten? Not sure where you get me there... :)


The white balance. That's why it's all blue.
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SB, I was just confused. After that I'd guessed it was typing error. Lately you have been saying you can't sleep well, so I understand...Thanks for correcting.

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