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Post September 30th, 2008, 12:56 pm

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Took this right after the WSU game last weekend.
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Post September 30th, 2008, 12:56 pm

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Post September 30th, 2008, 8:23 pm

It's a little dark the other half of the picture. But the composition was Good.
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Post September 30th, 2008, 9:22 pm

To tell you the truth, I like it. Looks like the sky is the center of attention, and I like the brightness and darkness of it. I don't know if the extremely dark parts would have made it look better if they were lighter or how much lighter, but I really like this composition.

The focal point is also very visible and it's nearly in the center of the photo :)

One thing though... there is not enough sky :( But I'm no expert at photography... barely a beginner.

Just my one cent :)
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Post October 1st, 2008, 8:15 am

If the buildings were lit up the sky would be blown out and/or greatly desaturated.
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Post October 1st, 2008, 3:35 pm

It was a little brighter in photoshop, you could see the people walking down the road a little more. Also it was kind of a snap shot, didn't really compose it much. If I had I think I would have tried to get the entire street light in.
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Post October 2nd, 2008, 6:55 am

I like it :)
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Post November 24th, 2008, 2:32 am

It looks good to me. I mean the whole focus is on the sky and the buildings in the fore-ground have the effect just needed to enhance the look of the picture. There is just the right amount of focus on the fore-ground. The tone is just excellent...
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Post December 1st, 2008, 8:47 am

That was a lovely day and you hard copied the moment. I like it.

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