SITE REVIEW: Alberto

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Post 3+ Months Ago

I just finished a personal page for myself :D I want to know what you guys think.

It took me about 40 mins to do it:

http://dhost.info/cubaneo/Alberto/HOME.htm
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Post 3+ Months Ago

Nice site , only problem is it is slow as hell i don't know if it's the site or the host :?:
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What connection are you under "hey"

It loaded pretty normal for me on 56 modem.

I lowered down the image quality aswell as used some technikes to make it load a little faster. But yea maybe the host could be slow.
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Now it's going fast for me . I have 2.0 mbps cable connection . Maybe the image quality thingy worked :shock:
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Post 3+ Months Ago

ran ultra slow for me earlier...
just a little bit slow now
...maybe ur host is sketchy...
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Yea bro maybe is the host, do you guys have any other oppinion excluding the loading speed.

I have one, I should have named the sections instead of just putting Alberto on every section. I guess I was kinda lazy
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I like the whole theme and color choices for the site. Looks good to me, maybe try getting your own domain http://www.yourname.com if you want to make it look more professional in case you plan on doing any services for others.
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hey thanks a lot paulk, I will consider the domain side.
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hmm.. nice one.. clean and clear but maybe you want to align the menu bar with the big banner above it. It maks the faded part on the right looks unprofesional if you see it in higher resolution..

but everything seems okay though :D
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Thanks bro it wasn't supposed to be proffesional, it's a personal page, but yea I'll consider your oppinions thanks!! :D
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:) this i syour FIRST time?

i think its better then mine...
but then again...
i think everyones is better then mine...

i like looking at pictures of the ppl tht i am reading about, maybe you could add extra?

or am i just not looking in the right place? :?:
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yea good idea, I actually had a picture in, but because I already have one on the top I thought it was kinda...I don't know maybe I should have another one.

And no sorry this is not my 1st time :D
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Post 3+ Months Ago

Dragon wrote:
I just finished a personal page for myself :D I want to know what you guys think.

It took me about 40 mins to do it:

http://dhost.info/cubaneo/Alberto/HOME.htm


Looks very good
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hey thanks Kevins_Kevlar
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yeah Kevins Kevlar nice comment.

Anyway Alberto - good color choices, blue and orange are always a great combo, I use them often. I like your fonts but I think there are too many. I usually try to limit myself to 2 graphical and 1 html, just to keep things clean.

I like the ghosting of yourself on the header, and you look dreamy and creative in the photo, like you are just being inspired at this exact moment to do something really great and creative.

As far as content, I need to know more in the portfolio, what parts of the website did you do? Design? Coding? You did this for MaxRampage but not for the others. What are the features of the site that make them really special. For example cubaneo.tk esta en espanol y ingles para la comunidad cubano en Kentucky. or something like this.

also you gotta do a spell check my man
Quote:
for wich I made a website


oh yeah and this dhost.info server is super slow
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ohhhh man! Digitelle this is the kind of comment I love to read! :D

First of all I want to thank you and the rest of the people who reply for taking the time to review the site! I apreciate it!


You are totally right about the fonts, there are too many, I wasn't thinking proffesionally while working on the site. But yea I totally agree with you.

The host, I know it's slow, but for now, this is all I have.

I totally missed the spell problem, lol, but it will be shortly fixed. Once again, Grasias...
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Hey Alberto.

I visited your site. First, my compliments for your nice design. I think you have to modify a few things to make him perfect ;-)

I think the drawing of you in the background of the header must go away.

And in the body of your site stays always ALBERTO. Maybe its better to put there the header of the page. e.g: Portfolio. I mean, now every site had 2 times ALBERTO on it. In the header and in the body. It's better if you leave it only in the header.

grz Peter
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Post 3+ Months Ago

Not bad, make it bigger tho. With more graphics.
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PeterFlikweert wrote:
Hey Alberto.

I visited your site. First, my compliments for your nice design. I think you have to modify a few things to make him perfect ;-)

I think the drawing of you in the background of the header must go away.

And in the body of your site stays always ALBERTO. Maybe its better to put there the header of the page. e.g: Portfolio. I mean, now every site had 2 times ALBERTO on it. In the header and in the body. It's better if you leave it only in the header.

grz Peter


Hey man you are right about the Alberto and Alberto. I need to change that to the sections name. Thanks for all the comments I apreciate them all.

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Thanks bro I'll see what can be done. :D

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