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Post November 29th, 2004, 8:48 am

You're right.. how the heck did I get a totally different site? lol

Anyhoo some comments, your entire main page is graphics!! no text. Should be interesting if ppl turn their graphics option off. Why is the whole page in graphics? Lots of those things could have been achieved in plain text. Also it's hard to tell what's a clickable graphic and what isn't.

Broken image on (http://www.myindya.com/statewise.html) and in FF I'm getting a weird box like thing under each state
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I noticed you don't have a navbar that appears on every page! I have to keep clicking on the back button to go back to find it on the main page. That's not good at all.

Capitalize your "i"'s

Why is there a clickable gif image on this page? (http://www.myindya.com/aboutus.html) the animated person behind the computer.

Activate the link to refer to a friend and correct the spelling mistake REFER is the correct spelling

Under Useful links, again spelling mistake. I'd suggest running your site through a spell checker before you publish. Also don't leave empty bulleted list items. Remove them if they are empty

Everything and Anything are one word

On this page (http://www.myindya.com/terms.html), don't underline your titles unless you're going to hyperlink them. They look like links they may confuse the viewer

Add more space between your numbered bulleted list in "4.3 Rules About Your Information."

In the bottom graphic where you used to introduce yourself "Hello, my name is.. bla bla bla" the image of the young man doesn't look very happy. I'd suggest putting a happier looking gentleman in there lol

Sign the guestbook isn't hyperlinked

You didn't put a DOCTYPE in your code

Missing alt tags for your images

Use CSS instead of inline font tags

The <u> element was deprecated (has been outdated) in HTML 4.01 and is not supported in XHTML 1.0 Strict DTD. Use <strong> instead, or even better for a much richer effect use style sheets
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Post November 29th, 2004, 8:48 am

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Post November 29th, 2004, 9:28 am

I think u should make the navigation bar top..
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Post November 29th, 2004, 5:13 pm

Once again thanks - Nucleo & 613flavah,

i have done as you suggested - i have replaced some gif and put text on my home page.

the mistakes had beed done - actually i dint sleep for the third day rarly 3hrs a day i want to finish this site & host by 1 jan05 and all work has to be done only by me so missed some spellings - i am using dreamweaver they have a spellcheker i will check my page before publish...

thats it and i think receiving so many reviews its self being good for my site!!!!!!!
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Post November 30th, 2004, 6:50 am

Good job on adding text to the front page :) But now your site is taking a looong time to load? DId you optimize your graphics?
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Post November 30th, 2004, 8:30 am

very slow serwer
too many colors
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Post November 30th, 2004, 11:11 am

looks professional! very nice work. I suggest using less images though, you sliced almost every pixel :wink:

Also, some images are missing, and there are some blank images. if you put the content on and finish the layout, it will be good!
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Post December 1st, 2004, 10:18 am

yotek wrote:
very slow serwer
too many colors


Yes i have deleted the outer glow of the images and made some corrections ...

i think now its fine looking for me - your suggestions :?:
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Post December 1st, 2004, 3:33 pm

whats the url again? b/c all i'm seeing is the "under construction" page..
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Post December 1st, 2004, 5:24 pm

sorry

you can view from this link

http://www.myindya.com/index.htm
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Post December 2nd, 2004, 7:32 am

just a few more spelling corrections :)
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your favourite toilet soap
if you type "define favourite" in google you get "front-runner: a competitor thought likely to win" so if you mean it as "something regarded with special favor or liking" then i would spell it "favorite".
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food & restaurent, outings,
*restaurant
and then finally, in the picture at the bottom for the about you part, you should capitalize the i where it says "i created this site to bring together" and then *fullfill should be fulfill* :) hope this helps.
otherwise, your site is looking great.
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Post December 2nd, 2004, 9:59 am

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as for the design part I thought of trying this way may be looks different from other portals,

Heh heh heh, yes- it is certainly different. I think it looks like a bulimic circus clown ate skittles and threw up on my screen :D I would tone the images down a bit :wink:
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Post December 2nd, 2004, 11:19 am

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as for the design part I thought of trying this way may be looks different from other portals,

Heh heh heh, yes- it is certainly different. I think it looks like a bulimic circus clown ate skittles and threw up on my screen :D I would tone the images down a bit :wink:


actually whts tht you ar trying to say its that so funny or something...
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Post December 2nd, 2004, 11:22 am

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Post December 3rd, 2004, 9:40 am

Thanks all you guy for the support , i learnt a lot from here, base on the reviews and suggestions , i had redesigned my home page as every one suggest that too bussssy and lots of graphics.....

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The entire thing is in images.

It looks great.. but the loading time was very slow. Use text, for christ's sake.

Otherwise the site looks great - design wise. Can't say anything about content, though, because there isn't any. :D



AnarchY SI wrote:
the site looks good to me, didn't take any noticable time to load.

but i did find a spelling error :)



quote="Nucleo"]
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Copy Rignt © My Indya.com 2005 - Complaint or Report Abuse: webmaster@myindya.com


had a quick look, first thing i noticed ^^

another thing i would sort out is having text and not having it as images

another thing, i could you makr ths links on the page more distinguashable. (is that a word?)
what i mean is, i couldn't tell what was an image or a link[/quote]


quote="613flavah"]You're right.. how the heck did I get a totally different site? lol

Anyhoo some comments, your entire main page is graphics!! no text. Should be interesting if ppl turn their graphics option off. Why is the whole page in graphics? Lots of those things could have been achieved in plain text. Also it's hard to tell what's a clickable graphic and what isn't.[/quote]


613flavah wrote:
Good job on adding text to the front page :) But now your site is taking a looong time to load? DId you optimize your graphics?



g0l` wrote:
looks professional! very nice work. I suggest using less images though, you sliced almost every pixel :wink:

Also, some images are missing, and there are some blank images. if you put the content on and finish the layout, it will be good!


quote="AnarchY SI"]just a few more spelling corrections :)
Quote:
your favourite toilet soap
if you type "define favourite" in google you get "front-runner: a competitor thought likely to win" so if you mean it as "something regarded with special favor or liking" then i would spell it "favorite".
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miner wrote:
as for the design part I thought of trying this way may be looks different from other portals,

Heh heh heh, yes- it is certainly different. I think it looks like a bulimic circus clown ate skittles and threw up on my screen :D I would tone the images down a bit :wink:



i redused the graphics and, added contents.........

i like the new design - bcus i created it but the world must accepts!!!!!!!!!

so i again post my request for review my new style

http://www.myindya.com/index.htm
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Post December 3rd, 2004, 10:47 am

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latest mobile,hobbies sports, music, food


you forgot a comma b/w hobbies & sports :) i'll be back later for more, i gotta jet right now.
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