SITE REVIEW: Bogey Killer - Golf Swing training system ebook

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Post 3+ Months Ago

Hello,

I would like to get my Bogey Killer Golf Swing training system ebook site reviewed.

http://www.BogeyKiller.com

You can also click through to the affiliate page as i'd like some feed back on that page as well

Thank You,
Mike
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WOW! What a long page ... that's like a whole book on one page ... Isn't there any way you could split it up into more pages ... ? I didn't even read the first two lines and then I just gave up, it seemed like way too much work to read all that ...

The page failed to Validate at W3C because of an incorrect (or nonexistent) character encoding ... you can click here to see the results anyway ... and then fix any errors afterwards ...

I also don't like the header image very much, but that is just personal preference .... also that sentence in the header doesn't seem right, it feels like you don't want a visitor to really have found it ... don't know why, it's just the feeling I get from reading it ...
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Post 3+ Months Ago

hi,

Read this thread http://www.ozzu.com/website-reviews/site-review-www-propertymixer-com-t79140.html. I have some info there that applies to you too and I did not want to repeat myself.

You might want to read the "Other design Considerations" section in my portfolio at http://cssfreelancer.atspace.com.

If there is anything else use my email in my portfolio please.

good luck
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Post 3+ Months Ago

looks good . But it's very long page.

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