SITE REVIEW: Cell Phone Pictures

  • edawg
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Post 3+ Months Ago

http://www.cellphonepictoria.com

This is my re-design of one of my first sites, let me know what you think.....

Thanks :lol:
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  • 8everything
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Post 3+ Months Ago

The site needs some work with the structure.. first of all, it would look much better if you spaced out your menus and headers... Also, a new logo design would be ideal ;) if you want to use plain text, atleast make it an <h1> tag so it's good for SEO rather than just an image file.
  • gozames
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Post 3+ Months Ago

disigne is nice i think but thare is problems with content i can not accses some pages you must work with this.and try to make better colors for disigne.this coolors is very died.
  • wilkin
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Post 3+ Months Ago

Nice effort

Make header more sharp & By request add some of 'Panasonic' I am a big fan of it.

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  • Hugin
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Post 3+ Months Ago

I don´t get it. It is a Cell phone picture site, but I can hardly find any pictures of any cell phones, just a waaaaaaaay to long menu.

The color scheme is ugly and inconsistent.

Your site does not validate @ validator.w3.org

Why can´t the descriptions of the images be regular text fields instead of text areas? It looks ridiculous.
  • danmarius7
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Post 3+ Months Ago

Nice one, keep the pictures coming. You can improve-it tough.
  • jankyzhang
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Post 3+ Months Ago

I feel it is very nice .
make the images in right more sharp.
  • murcielagossi
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Post 3+ Months Ago

The site is very mashed together...the banner is smushed, the menu is way to long and the "latest pics" section...the pictures are strectched way to much.

And if your going to have that much content, use a smaller font size.

Also, you need a more appealling banner, its just too simple.

And you have....drum roll please...... 373 errors...I haven't ever...I mean ever seen that many errors.

Errors are Here

But the site does have a nice purpose to it, Good luck. :D
  • flightie
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Post 3+ Months Ago

I think the colours aren't great for a technology related site and it looks quite generic, like something that's come from a template. But it does have a lot of info and content which is good.
  • kwiatek
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Post 3+ Months Ago

First of all, I like the idea of UR site, really nice:-)And if u will work to overcome all minuses, I think it will be very funny site.
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Post 3+ Months Ago

Hello Edawg,

I think you simply need a new site design. I agree with many of the other replies that the colors don't go together. It just appears as though you’re trying to squeeze too much into one page. Why not use a free pre-made web template? This may solve the color problem and help you unclutter your website.
  • tstates
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Post 3+ Months Ago

Nice layout, although you may want to place the "sign up" link in a more accessible location. Make it easy for people to sign up and get started. Overall, the website flows nicely, and is very clean. I like it, and would use the services.

The "latest pictures" column (far right side of homepage) is stretch a little far, making the pictures look like poor quality (like mobile phone pictures...). You might want to consider changing that a bit. Other than that, you've done a great job organizing the information.

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