SITE REVIEW: DH Clan Website

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Post July 27th, 2005, 3:03 am

Hello im new to this forum but it looked like just what i need. I have tried many differnet designs for my clan website but i cant seem to get anything interesting. I have done a basic layout and i think it is OK but not very good.

http://darkhorses.fragism.com/

Please tell me how i could make a better design.

(I cant use PHP because the hosting wont let me and i dont wish to switch hosting)
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Post July 27th, 2005, 3:03 am

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Post July 27th, 2005, 8:19 am

Your right, it isn't very good.

The site itself and is very plain. Nothing appealed to me to look any further. You need content relating to the site's purpose. Some graphics would be nice as well. Screen shots of the game your clan plays. You definitely need more. If you are trying to recruit users, give them a reason to want to join your clan versus joining someone else's clan. Look at other clan sites,, there are some reviewed here and see how they set theirs up.
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Post July 27th, 2005, 11:48 am

Ok ive done a new design using CSS and hopefully it should look much better.

Note the music player in the Nav Bar
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Post July 27th, 2005, 11:56 am

Yes, it looks better but still doesn't have much in the way of content and the media player don't play anything.
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Post July 28th, 2005, 3:42 pm

Um...

That is just a dreamweaver template. You did nothing to modify it what so ever. Exept delete the nav bar at the top. And you should make a image/flash header. Not just plain text.

Good luck with your site :)
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Post July 30th, 2005, 4:25 am

Damn you found me out! :twisted:

It has been taken down now due to the clan being disbanded
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Post August 1st, 2005, 8:15 pm

u said it was a clan website its about your weird turtle poems lol its so weird

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