SITE REVIEW: Colorado Springs Limousine Services

  • violatordead
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Post 3+ Months Ago

Hi w-masters.

I'd like to hear your advice and suggestions about http://www.alblimo.com - Really first Colorado Springs Limo Service :)))


Thanks in advance.
  • violatordead
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Post 3+ Months Ago

...and general design http://www.alblimo.com/home.html
  • eautocad
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Post 3+ Months Ago

I like the yellow on the grey background for the title... It instills a classy feeling that you want with limo service
  • delstu
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Post 3+ Months Ago

First link:
What is the purpose of your site?
Will you be looking for search engine traffic or advertising for traffic?
Have any testimonials?

Is English your first language? Needs proofreading.

Had to click on "CLICK HERE TO SEE AVAILABLE PACKAGES" to see actual navigation and content

Second link: I like this much better. Actually find some information here.

First link left me wondering "What's this", knew it was about limo service, but did not entice me to stay on site or seek further info.
  • loftgolf
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Post 3+ Months Ago

delstu wrote:
First link:

Is English your first language? Needs proofreading.


Second link: I like this much better. Actually find some information here.

First link left me wondering "What's this", knew it was about limo service, but did not entice me to stay on site or seek further info.


I thought the "Is English your first language" was rude, well, until I read your text. You really need to address the grammar and spelling issues on the site! I did not like the first link you posted but really liked the second one. It had much more color and was more professional. But seriously, have someone proof read your text prior to posting it!
:hmm:
  • Prime
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Post 3+ Months Ago

Doesn't display in a 1024*768 resolution - criminal offence :evil: there is a horizontal scroll bar :( And the mouse-over effects only work on the middle link (lifestyle) until the flash has finished loading...

Nice design though, well done :D but needs tweaking...

Good luck.
  • Popeyethesailor
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Post 3+ Months Ago

This is commercial website,
and for that purpose not bad,
but I think that you will need more content if you plan to rank well in search engines, consider adding a blog or rss feed.
You should change Title tag putting the name of Colorado Springs first.
Good luck
  • booniesyeo
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Post 3+ Months Ago

nice and simple design..great for navigation as it's not clogged up. More information should be able to make you rank better.
  • adorton
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Post 3+ Months Ago

Our rates link not working. And I don't know if it's me or the site but the static images are loading very slowly.

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