SITE REVIEW: DBZ Pride
- Skirge
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December 19th, 2004, 11:02 am
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GodBeGone - Atheist Blog
- 613flavah
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December 20th, 2004, 8:14 am
Site takes way too long to load
I'd say ditch the snowflakes. It's kind of annoying
Your site isn't scalable
Make your left navbar stand out more. Right now it just looks like plain text to me. Make it look more like a navbar
You should include an intro paragraph on your main page describing what your site is about
Cut the size of your site, the vertical scrollbars extend way past the actual content
If you only have 1 or 2 affiliates don't post empty affiliate images, it makes your site look like it's missing content
Get rid of animated gifs, they are distracting and so 1996
Why do you have a link to your splash page? I don't understand what the purpose of that would be?
Re-arrange the order of your navbar items. "Link Us" should not be a listed as a third item, Should be listed more close to the bottom of the list, same goes for Contact Us. The first 3-4 links should be content relevant links
Missing meta data
You should put a <noscript> tag for all jvs
Link to your CSS externally, same goes for all your jvs. It will help load your site much faster
Missing alt tags on images
You're declaring font & font sizes in your css but then you're using another font in various sections of your content. They are going to cancel each other out. Declare all fonts in your css to keep your content cleaner
I'm confused as to why you hare declaring a stylesheet halfway down your code? All scripts should be declared between your <head> & </head> tags not after your body tag
I'd say ditch the snowflakes. It's kind of annoying
Your site isn't scalable
Make your left navbar stand out more. Right now it just looks like plain text to me. Make it look more like a navbar
You should include an intro paragraph on your main page describing what your site is about
Cut the size of your site, the vertical scrollbars extend way past the actual content
If you only have 1 or 2 affiliates don't post empty affiliate images, it makes your site look like it's missing content
Get rid of animated gifs, they are distracting and so 1996
Why do you have a link to your splash page? I don't understand what the purpose of that would be?
Re-arrange the order of your navbar items. "Link Us" should not be a listed as a third item, Should be listed more close to the bottom of the list, same goes for Contact Us. The first 3-4 links should be content relevant links
Missing meta data
You should put a <noscript> tag for all jvs
Link to your CSS externally, same goes for all your jvs. It will help load your site much faster
Missing alt tags on images
You're declaring font & font sizes in your css but then you're using another font in various sections of your content. They are going to cancel each other out. Declare all fonts in your css to keep your content cleaner
I'm confused as to why you hare declaring a stylesheet halfway down your code? All scripts should be declared between your <head> & </head> tags not after your body tag
"bless us and love us so we can dance and truly be free"
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- SB
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December 20th, 2004, 8:57 am
613flavah wrote:
Site takes way too long to load
I'd say ditch the snowflakes. It's kind of annoying
Your site isn't scalable
Make your left navbar stand out more. Right now it just looks like plain text to me. Make it look more like a navbar
You should include an intro paragraph on your main page describing what your site is about
Cut the size of your site, the vertical scrollbars extend way past the actual content
If you only have 1 or 2 affiliates don't post empty affiliate images, it makes your site look like it's missing content
Get rid of animated gifs, they are distracting and so 1996
Why do you have a link to your splash page? I don't understand what the purpose of that would be?
Re-arrange the order of your navbar items. "Link Us" should not be a listed as a third item, Should be listed more close to the bottom of the list, same goes for Contact Us. The first 3-4 links should be content relevant links
Missing meta data
You should put a <noscript> tag for all jvs
Link to your CSS externally, same goes for all your jvs. It will help load your site much faster
Missing alt tags on images
You're declaring font & font sizes in your css but then you're using another font in various sections of your content. They are going to cancel each other out. Declare all fonts in your css to keep your content cleaner
I'm confused as to why you hare declaring a stylesheet halfway down your code? All scripts should be declared between your <head> & </head> tags not after your body tag
I'd say ditch the snowflakes. It's kind of annoying
Your site isn't scalable
Make your left navbar stand out more. Right now it just looks like plain text to me. Make it look more like a navbar
You should include an intro paragraph on your main page describing what your site is about
Cut the size of your site, the vertical scrollbars extend way past the actual content
If you only have 1 or 2 affiliates don't post empty affiliate images, it makes your site look like it's missing content
Get rid of animated gifs, they are distracting and so 1996
Why do you have a link to your splash page? I don't understand what the purpose of that would be?
Re-arrange the order of your navbar items. "Link Us" should not be a listed as a third item, Should be listed more close to the bottom of the list, same goes for Contact Us. The first 3-4 links should be content relevant links
Missing meta data
You should put a <noscript> tag for all jvs
Link to your CSS externally, same goes for all your jvs. It will help load your site much faster
Missing alt tags on images
You're declaring font & font sizes in your css but then you're using another font in various sections of your content. They are going to cancel each other out. Declare all fonts in your css to keep your content cleaner
I'm confused as to why you hare declaring a stylesheet halfway down your code? All scripts should be declared between your <head> & </head> tags not after your body tag
Your worthy of the "best website reviewer" award 613flavah!
Definatly get rid of the snow and re-organise your navigation bar. You should really have the "Forum" at the top of the list, not at the very bottom. You dont want people thinking you are desprite for emails that you have your "contact us" info page before the actual content page do you?
It did seem to take a while loading up, it shouldnt have taken that long especially as i use Broadband.
- daremedy
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December 20th, 2004, 9:54 am
SB wrote:
Your worthy of the "best website reviewer" award 613flavah!
I second that motion
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This index didnt load anything when I looked at it, just a bunch of dead images. The main page has the same problem, a lot of dead images, including some blank image animations which were quite annoying. Maybe you're in the midst of a rehaul. Most of my opinions were already summed up in the previous posts, maybe once the images are fixed and I can see the site more clearly, a better review can be made.
- ramone_johnny
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December 22nd, 2004, 12:23 am
- 613flavah
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December 22nd, 2004, 8:23 am
kiss kiss SB & daremedy
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December 23rd, 2004, 9:17 am
shucks 
- horkam
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December 23rd, 2004, 8:42 pm
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