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  • wwwben
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  • karamel
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overall looks nice, but what bothers me that green color it really hurts the eye
  • wwwben
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  • frank_tudor
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hi wwwben,

I took a look at your site. It looks like we do similar work.

i think the green looks nice but here are some tips to fix the washout effect.

bevels and drop shadows.

I am not sure what you use for graphics but you should find those effects (or something similar in most graphics packages).

Ok lets see:

Ok: consider bullet item list on your package deals.

Everything runs together and I eventually stopped reading...and of course I was more interested than the average person because we are in the similar markets. So my point is, if I stop reading at one point, the average guy may stop reading way before that.

Ok next, we shouldn't have to click to services to see all that stuff,

Consider making some of those things accessible from the main page.

It is good that you provide examples like the logo and animations.

Well that is all for now.

Frank
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like the idea of your site,, but it seems to be unfinished!
i mean navigation menu and the whole appearence at all.
  • Lost HUnter
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Text on your services page doesn't look good in bold.
Normal text for descriptions would be better
  • wwwben
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Thanks for the Input everyone .. they are certainly thing i will look into
  • d00m1001
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Layout is fine. I can see how the bright green's and white's may hurt some folks eyes but for me it gets the job done :)

Only thing I can suggest is making the menu look like it's part of the graphical layout rather than just droping it over the background. Overall, good job.
  • joebert
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Might want to provide a fallback image for people with Flash disabled.
Easiest way to do so is by adding an img element inside the object element (just like the embed that's inside it). That img element gets fallen back on when the browser doesn't do Flash, but stays invisible otherwise.
  • wwwben
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joebert wrote:
Might want to provide a fallback image for people with Flash disabled.
Easiest way to do so is by adding an img element inside the object element (just like the embed that's inside it). That img element gets fallen back on when the browser doesn't do Flash, but stays invisible otherwise.


Great idea.. will do that ..thanks :)
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1-logo: i suggest youu use a darker color as background if you want to keep the light green
2- under the logo: "2006 ..." is totaly unreadable
You can draw similar green line on the layout to evoid breaking it like this
3- i think it's better for any potential client to check a portfolio of your works to deside, you can add this section to your site

Else: i like the simplicity in it, professional layout
  • TLP
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Yea, the green does not really help the sites appeal. Although you may be tired of blue, it is still considered one of the most inviting colors for websites. Maybe you could mix in a few different colored shades of blue to make it stand out more rather than using a single color blue. Or, you could try a blue and orange combo since they are complimentary colors. It took me a while to realize that but the two colors actually do work well together. The site itself is very clean and professional looking but the green just takes something away from the sites overall appeal.
  • wwwben
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Thanks for the input everyone! :)
  • see1ad
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Your website is about offering services to websites, but in order to do that your website must look impressive. It doesn't look impressive. Though, if you want to keep it simple and easy to navigate, then you've done the job. You need more graphics. Good idea.
  • pspdownloads
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it is a simple cool site.
since you offer to design web sites
i supposte it should be more attractive.
i think people wish to have attractive sites.
  • wwwben
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can anyone provide me with an example of what you consider to be an attractive site?
  • rockafromhell
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i think u should like make green darker a little bit and then for like ther menu you can barely see when it highlights after you make darker you can have that like same and will look very nice.

but the green so far looks like to light looks bad...but darker just a little bit would look much better.


Josh
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The first thing I notice is the green. Have you tried a darker more bluish green? Might be a bit better than lime. And it will make the titles a lot easier to read.

Second thing I notice is '2006 Nebs Webs' nearly in the middle of the page. Maybe put it at the bottom. And is copyright missing? Just wondering.

I have a large screen resolution and the bar ends suddenly where the menu is and comes out the other side. Is it possible to have it continue through the menu or fade out or have you experimented with that?

The font colour everywhere is too light and often hard to read. Especially the clock in the upper right corner.

Where it says 'Years of Experience' in your about section, you're missing the :.

In the contact section the form is overlapping the other text on my computer and it looks wierd and confusing. I am viewing on high resolution Firefox.

In 'services' the grey turning yellow on mouse over looks horrible. Light grey maybe and why just text highlight?

What most other sites for web design have and I think yours should incorporate too is a list of sites they've done and/or testimonials.

I know it seems like a lot I'm suggesting but you are in the web design business so your design should be perfect if you want to make a good impression.
  • wwwben
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Wow. Thanks Azoundria

those are good suggestions .. and it seems you took a lot of time to go over my site ... Thanks :-)
  • orcrist
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man its a template ! and a free one, iirc.
and you offer web design service? custom design?
like, youll rip someone, or google out free template and sell me that?
  • orcrist
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:evil: o yea, here it is
http://www.sixshootermedia.com/Pretty_a ... reen_line/

are those custom solutions?
:bad-words:
  • wwwben
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  • orcrist
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actually i never said it wasn't a template.


nope, you only asked for review, for me thats like saying i did that, sorry. and what you are saying makes no sence, just spaeks of your inability and uncreativity- not exactly hallmark of a designer.

you see, i wouldnt say a word if it was a blog, or an bakerers site, but a designer with little selfdignity would never use someone elses template for his/hers site.

besides, id feel cheated if i was your customer and found out something like that...
but stick around, ill email them myself and ask what they think about it.
sorry, i didnt googled for templates you used in your portofolio, opened only one, and it was uuurrrgh just too ugly to be worth it.
you may want to choose less known template next time, or alter something else beside text.


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please take a look at my site


i dont see you saying "its work of..."

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joebert wrote:
Might want to provide a fallback image for people with Flash disabled.
Easiest way to do so is by adding an img element inside the object element (just like the embed that's inside it). That img element gets fallen back on when the browser doesn't do Flash, but stays invisible otherwise.



Great idea.. will do that ..thanks Smile


yea, like youd know how to do that :p


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can anyone provide me with an example of what you consider to be an attractive site?


why? so you can rip them too?
  • ranochio
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i like your website.

the only problem is the "We Offer...."
try to change the font because it is not so crisp
  • jamesallen3333
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Yep like the layout, one thing I will say is the alignment on the form could be better, or mabe i'm just a sucker for symmetry
  • Azoundria
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Wow. Thanks Azoundria

those are good suggestions .. and it seems you took a lot of time to go over my site ... Thanks Smile


Good to know my reviews are appreciated here!

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