SITE REVIEW: EMP (MY 2nd site)

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Post May 24th, 2004, 4:30 pm

Well here is my second site, i only got a picture, and thats all you need, cause it will be the same ifi made it a site (cause having some problems). Anyway tell me the stuff that can make it better, and what i should change abotu it. Thanx
http://img55.photobucket.com/albums/v168/ikabuianman1/site.jpg
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Post May 24th, 2004, 8:41 pm

Looks pretty good. I like the text links on the Left. They look original. I would add a little mree to the top. I dont know what. It just looks a little bland. If there is gonna be text in the middle, then just leave it. I like it. If you have read any of my other reviews, you know I dont like brightly colored web pages. To me, simple is beautiful. Your web page is beautiful. Good job! :)
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Post May 25th, 2004, 1:14 am

Well done! But! The blue background stands out too much in contrast with you grays. In my opinion, you should loose the blue for some gray or use it somwhere else aswell. It breaks the balance in the way you did it. Otherwise clean and simple...
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Post May 25th, 2004, 3:43 am

Perhaps have rollovers on the nav from a grey to that blue.

I'd change the the header from the grey to give the page some colour. Nothing wrong with grey, but as always too much of anythin can make it look bad. Then again, make sure it goes well with the grey. Perhaps carry on the blue trait to go with the navigation.
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Post May 25th, 2004, 2:05 pm

thanks.. :).. i kind of like da blue there, it doesnt look that right, but i got used to it.. lol
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Post May 25th, 2004, 3:51 pm

Posibly look to change the logo, it does go ok but I think it could look a little more like it belonged lol, as for the colours they look ace and I think that site can easily work really well. Nice one mate!
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Post May 25th, 2004, 6:04 pm

MetaVirusX - please keep posted pics under 600px wide, thanks.
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Post May 25th, 2004, 6:13 pm

I like it. But, I don't know. It's a little empty. Not in the no content way, but the navagtion has a huge spot of nothingness...
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Post May 25th, 2004, 10:54 pm

Looking good... :-D
Wut about keeping the menu a lil bit easyer to read...maybe it's just me, but you have to focus your eye in order to read well.....keep it simple...
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Post May 26th, 2004, 4:07 am

well on the full version you dont relaly have to.. http://mvx.forerunners.org ; there is it in html, filled i with text...
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Post May 26th, 2004, 7:18 am

i'd change the nav font.
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Post May 26th, 2004, 11:33 pm

I agree on the nav font. And maybe it's color too. White on light blue isn't too easy to read.
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Post May 27th, 2004, 12:04 am

It's okay - I'm sure it will look less bland when other text and graphics are added. Right now...it doesn't really pop out at me.

My second comment on these boards...and was critical. Sorry...I really hope that honesty works here.

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Post May 28th, 2004, 10:35 pm

the nav does look blurry in my eyes -.-

its nice, I like grey! :lol: Keep it up..
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Post May 31st, 2004, 12:14 am

Nice layout overall. i just think that u should change the nav font and maybe if u want centre it.
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