SITE REVIEW: EMP (MY 2nd site)

  • MetaVirusX
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Post 3+ Months Ago

Well here is my second site, i only got a picture, and thats all you need, cause it will be the same ifi made it a site (cause having some problems). Anyway tell me the stuff that can make it better, and what i should change abotu it. Thanx
http://img55.photobucket.com/albums/v168/ikabuianman1/site.jpg
  • Smokenjoe
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Post 3+ Months Ago

Looks pretty good. I like the text links on the Left. They look original. I would add a little mree to the top. I dont know what. It just looks a little bland. If there is gonna be text in the middle, then just leave it. I like it. If you have read any of my other reviews, you know I dont like brightly colored web pages. To me, simple is beautiful. Your web page is beautiful. Good job! :)
  • dizzy_boy
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Post 3+ Months Ago

Well done! But! The blue background stands out too much in contrast with you grays. In my opinion, you should loose the blue for some gray or use it somwhere else aswell. It breaks the balance in the way you did it. Otherwise clean and simple...
  • emitind.
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Post 3+ Months Ago

Perhaps have rollovers on the nav from a grey to that blue.

I'd change the the header from the grey to give the page some colour. Nothing wrong with grey, but as always too much of anythin can make it look bad. Then again, make sure it goes well with the grey. Perhaps carry on the blue trait to go with the navigation.
  • MetaVirusX
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Post 3+ Months Ago

thanks.. :).. i kind of like da blue there, it doesnt look that right, but i got used to it.. lol
  • jnacool
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Post 3+ Months Ago

Posibly look to change the logo, it does go ok but I think it could look a little more like it belonged lol, as for the colours they look ace and I think that site can easily work really well. Nice one mate!
  • UNFLUX
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Post 3+ Months Ago

MetaVirusX - please keep posted pics under 600px wide, thanks.
  • balko
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Post 3+ Months Ago

I like it. But, I don't know. It's a little empty. Not in the no content way, but the navagtion has a huge spot of nothingness...
  • Dragon
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Post 3+ Months Ago

Looking good... :-D
Wut about keeping the menu a lil bit easyer to read...maybe it's just me, but you have to focus your eye in order to read well.....keep it simple...
  • MetaVirusX
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Post 3+ Months Ago

well on the full version you dont relaly have to.. http://mvx.forerunners.org ; there is it in html, filled i with text...
  • emitind.
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Post 3+ Months Ago

i'd change the nav font.
  • Liquescence
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Post 3+ Months Ago

I agree on the nav font. And maybe it's color too. White on light blue isn't too easy to read.
  • Dazzzleu
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Post 3+ Months Ago

It's okay - I'm sure it will look less bland when other text and graphics are added. Right now...it doesn't really pop out at me.

My second comment on these boards...and was critical. Sorry...I really hope that honesty works here.

:)
  • Foxy
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Post 3+ Months Ago

the nav does look blurry in my eyes -.-

its nice, I like grey! :lol: Keep it up..
  • soulseek3r
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Post 3+ Months Ago

Nice layout overall. i just think that u should change the nav font and maybe if u want centre it.
  • isthistakenyet?
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Post 3+ Months Ago

this may seem really picky but people really should add the scroll="auto"
attribute to there body tag, this way you dont get an ugly looking scroll area that is not even being used lurking at the side of your site.
  • thewhipple
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Post 3+ Months Ago

I like the coloring, but i find the text on the buttons a little unfriendly,(maybe im just getting old) but i didnt find my eyes adjusted indtantly to it...
Not a great lover of the water color style pic of the moose, besides that all looks good to me

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