SITE REVIEW: Excalibur

  • Primordial
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Post September 28th, 2005, 4:56 am

Hi Guys,

Still plodding on with my personal domain ... The TOP TOTTY article appears to be very popular but what other sections would 'the boys' like to see? I'm thinking about a 'Totty for Hire' and a 'I've sh*gged a celebrity Totty' section ... If anybody has a good story to start me off let me know ... :D :D

Let me know what you think ... this is a 'lads sites in the making' ... women not needed ... :D

http://www.excaliburclan.com

Cheers, Primordial ... :shock: :D
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Post September 28th, 2005, 4:56 am

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Post September 28th, 2005, 9:53 am

Hi Primordial, lots of stuff about the site that needs work. First of I see when I navigate the banner changes colors. I strongly suggest to just decide on one banner and keep it on all the pages. Second the site layout look very amatuer made. I'm guessing you did it yourself. I would suggest looking at a premade template for the site. Bigwebmaster has his own site for templates. http://templates.bigwebmaster.com/ I suggest getting rid of the current look and go with a more professional layout. Sorry, I dont think there is much appeal with the look and a fresh start is probaly what you need. Good luck with your site.
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Post October 5th, 2005, 7:03 pm

This site is interesting but could use a little work. I would use a solid white background and still pictures. Page transition is really smooth but the animated marquee motto is a bit hard to read. On your search interface, I would put the 'refine criteria' link after the results. Lastly, you may want to use the gray space on the right for Google Adwords so you can make some cash on the empty space. Keep it up!
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Post November 25th, 2005, 1:23 am

nice website good content


what abt replacing black background at the top and bottom of the page with a light grey one.

a bit of work can be done on your logo ( http://www.excaliburclan.com/images/banner.gif )

the four flash u used at the start up of the page needs work. they are not so clear. quality of these flash files can be improved

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