SITE REVIEW: Exquisite Corpse Project

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Post August 23rd, 2006, 7:57 am

Hi...this site has been up for a little while, but I'd really love any feedback you can give.

The concept is that there is one storyline, and each week a different flash animator adds a segment to the story. I think the animation is pretty cool... comments would be greatly appreciated

http://www.exquisitepf.com/
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Post August 23rd, 2006, 7:57 am

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Post August 25th, 2006, 1:14 am

I love the idea. I do not really read online comics or anime or something like that, but this, i`ll watch.

Good luck with it.
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Post August 25th, 2006, 8:11 am

cool! thanks!
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Post August 25th, 2006, 11:33 pm

I love the colors you are using for this site and your logo is simple and nice as well. I love the idea of letting different people take over the story at different parts to see how it ends. I used to work with kids in non profit work and have played a similar game with starting a storyline and letting each kid write their own little part. That was always interesting. The only thing I suggest with this site is that you let the small thumbnails on the bottom act as links as well. Other than that, awesome, and I think you should do more when this one is completed.

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Post August 26th, 2006, 12:04 am

an interesting site. I like the colours and flash animations which make the home page stand out. 10/10
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Post August 26th, 2006, 2:28 am

Hey there, great site! Easy on the eye, well layed out and easy to navigate, not sure if i cn find anything bad about it. Keep up the good work! :wink:
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Post August 26th, 2006, 3:13 pm

webanmtr wrote:
Hi...this site has been up for a little while, but I'd really love any feedback you can give.

Two things:

- works only if you a flash player installed
- you need a high speed internet for really use (main site more 600KB)

And last, i didn't find any alternatives. Without Flash there is nothing...
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Post August 26th, 2006, 8:47 pm

needs better content and i dont like the flash design. when i see it all i can think is the webmaster was to lazy to design
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Post August 27th, 2006, 9:27 am

The animation and the story are cute. I like the idea. The only problem with all flash pages is that browsers have a hard time crwling it so you might end up having a hard time getting traffic from search engines.
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Post August 30th, 2006, 9:15 am

cool!

there was a brand new flsh segment posted this week, if any of you guys want to see it
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Post August 31st, 2006, 7:42 pm

I couldn't tell what the site was about. I looked at the home page and it didn't catch my interest, no could I tell what the site was about.
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Post September 6th, 2006, 9:17 am

did you read the text at the top of the page? i thought that explained it...
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Post September 20th, 2006, 7:34 am

sorry to post again, but i wanted to let you know that this site has been an ongoing project for a while, and now it's complete. Site probably won't be up for too much longer so id really appreciate feedback/comments if you havent done so already...thanks!
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Post September 20th, 2006, 8:04 pm

CLAP CLAP CLAP
i was entertained with the flash story.
Great site! Its worth a visit.

However using browsercam.com - I opened it on different Browser, I noticed it is not showing in Netscape Windows 2000 - here is the screenshot

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