SITE REVIEW: first flash site

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Post 3+ Months Ago

this is the first site ive actually made in flash..that includes external files for its content...and stuff like that. tell me whatcha think!

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(keep in mind its my first try...dont tear it apart too much)

oh, and i was having problems with the scrollbar...its a little messed up. it doesnt change size with the external content which seems weird. also, it wasnt even showing up by just loading external content. i had to actually type the words into flash to get it to show up (for just the first section, "home"). any advice?
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I like the colours used. It is nice and simple and to be honest it does the trick.

If this is your first try then its amazing! The logo looks smashing also.
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Post 3+ Months Ago

hey thanks!

yeah, its my first flash..site thing. ill hopefully be doing a lot more soon and be able to learn a lot from this flash forum
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Post 3+ Months Ago

All i can say is well done, and yeah the flash forum is probably the best place to learn. :)

It's recommended to start reading up on actionscripting. Maybe get a library of codes and find out what they do.
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thanks again man.

yeah, defintly gonna start gettin use to actionscripting....it seems more intuitive than other languages. my favorite is "gotoAndPlay" and "nextScene." I wonder what those do? lol...im gonna go read up :)
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Well most functions explains itself really, such as:

Quote:
stop();


lol. All the basic functions wont take long to know.
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i know, its GREAT
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Well I have seen only some scrolling text for all links..is that all in there?
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hasnatme wrote:
Well I have seen only some scrolling text for all links..is that all in there?


dispector wrote:
keep in mind its my first try...

sorry to dissapoint you... could you maybe give me advice instead of an insult?
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Mate..I'm really shocked!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I didn't meant to insult you...I just asked you that is there only text or something else there?..But you thoght me wrong...I'm sorry for my speech if that really hurts you.

Note: I don't think that text went for insult..that was a question I asked you..if you told yes then I may some suggest..but anyway..I didn't mind about your asking...cause fault is our nature.
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yeah, i guess i misunderstood what you were trying to say. its hard to tell someones tone online...lol


yeah...i dont really know how to do anything besides include text files...is there a way to include html? any suggestions would be awsome

and sorry for the misunderstanding....its all good
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Post 3+ Months Ago

I love the colours ! The design looks good too , but as you mentioned a customized scrollbar will do it :)
Considering it was your first attempt , it was really good. *shrugs* can't remember mine , it was worse than any html site. I would also suggest a bit more stronger font since it looks a bit blur . on the whole , it is a user-friendly site ! *thumbs up*
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Post 3+ Months Ago

Decent site :) :gelious: That was your first time chekc out this site http://www.framfab.com
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Post 3+ Months Ago

Very nice site. Flash for a first timer is not too easy, so you did something a lot of people couldn't do. I like the logo, and I like how the site layout is smashed in the middle. Makes it look very compact and professional.

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I must say, I wouldn't have known the difference if you were just a beginner or if you had some experience. The layout and the color palatte you used works with the subject matter.
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Very nice and catches the eye. I cant believe this is the first time you have done this. You look like you know what you are doing.
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Post 3+ Months Ago

wow, thanks everyone! i didnt expect such a great response. i was thinking of sticking to normal layouts, but with all this input im gonna see what I can do. thanks again :)

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