SITE REVIEW: Frantic-Designs

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Post July 15th, 2004, 4:44 am

Well where do i start?
Your graphics are good but have you thought about seo or what your visitors will be looking for?
Firstly what purpose does the splash page have. I found no real purpose at all other than because you think it looks good (which it does) but customers and searchengines will hate it. Get rid of the splash page.
Secondly does your banner and nav menu have to be so big? I'm on a large resolution setting and most of the important info is hidden under the viewable screen. Reduce the banner and make your menu a little slimmer, the more people can see straight away the more they will want to look further. Personally if i had found your site i would have left immediatly for several reasons. The splash page, the lack of info on the viewable screen, the fact that some of your graphics have been pushed out or down (botom of the page).
From an seo point of view your lost. Your selling a product and in a very competitive market. You will have to demonstrate to the user that you know all about this stuff so maybe a couple of hours a week dedicated to learning about that stuff would pay of big for you.
Thats enough for now. Hope that this has helped a little.
You have some talent for creating graphics there, build on that with good usability and seo techniques.
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Post July 15th, 2004, 4:44 am

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Post July 22nd, 2004, 1:32 pm

Very nice!! I like the art work, I can tell that you used Photoshop for most of the art, didn't you?
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Post August 8th, 2004, 6:10 pm

Thank you for that feedback phil very interesting. Well it has a new design now, which i feal looks a lot more cleaner easier to understand and gets to the point. Yes i used photoshop for my old design and for my new one. I am now working hard at SEO, but i am new at it so i have a long way to go yet.

Once again thanks for feedback.

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Post August 11th, 2004, 3:31 am

I would lose the bevel and emboss completely. Definitely from the text in your nav and at the bottom of the page. It's illegible in some places. Also if you click on "Links" your graphics become misaligned at the top. You also need some examples of your work somewhere and I would run a spellcheck asap. It's a nice site though, good luck with it m8.

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