SITE REVIEW: http://www.furphie.com

  • donalduck_sg
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Post 3+ Months Ago

Please review my origami website.
My website can find from the google, yahoo, and msn but i have to type the full url address
http://www.furphie.com
or else can't find it.
please review my site and give some advice.
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You have no homepage? I'm redirected straight to http://www.furphie.com/origami/plane/index.htm, which has the <title> ori_plan_home_temp.

It's great that you're trying to present content quickly, but some kind of introduction to the site (who you are, what the site is about etc.) would be better I feel.
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I saw a cute picture for a split second. Up came a paper airplane making site.
  • Rod_Snyder
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Post 3+ Months Ago

I too saw a page pop up and immediately reroute.

I like origami and think you did a good job demonstrating how to construct the products . . . I would like to see a home page "introduction" section
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Post 3+ Months Ago

Topic has been unlocked, please resume your reviews.
  • bilzone
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Post 3+ Months Ago

Your design is verry low.
- Try to make a header first and change your title from ori_plan_home_temp in what your site doing.
- With links try to make buttons or make an "on hover" ...
- And i think you have much text ads from adsense...
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The design is very basic and I like that. The logo needs changed into something more powerful and professional. Something that gives more impression.
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this site's interface is awesome... simple and easy to use! I don't like sites that are too flashy... gets way too distracting. Nice job!
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Nice work!
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jstar wrote:
this site's interface is awesome... simple and easy to use! I don't like sites that are too flashy... gets way too distracting. Nice job!

Yeah, that was... what I was... trying to say :roll:
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Post 3+ Months Ago

I, too, like the big simple look. You may have some success with your adsense, once you get ranked.

I checked your meta tags. You might take "hobby" out of your keywords and add "paper airplane" and "paper airplanes", and your description doesn't make sense grammatically. "simpling" is not a word. Maybe try, "Easy to follow directions for making paper airplanes using simple origami." ... I don't know, that's not great, but it is better than what you've got there.

Your "title" is: ori_plan_home_temp which isn't very descriptive. Also, the title, keywords and description are the same for every page, which doesn't help you with the search engines. Try putting a descriptive title, keywords and description that's unique, at least partially, for each page. They can be lagely the same, but include the name of the plane in addition to the other informatioon.

buttons would look nice for the side menu instead of plain links, but it isn't that big a deal I think.
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i am still to understand what is the site about .,... n more then that, the purpose .....
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Post 3+ Months Ago

Include a border, and work on the right links, use css to make the look better

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