SITE REVIEW: http://www.liltmanproductions.tk

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Post 3+ Months Ago

hi everyone, just made an online portfolio to show some of my work and site's i have created.

would really appreciate some comments, there isn't too much content at the moment but you can see some of my other site's i have created from the links on this one

look forward to hearing some opinions (wether bad or good)

i know the name is crap too, i can't think of a good one yet, and i'm mad about lilt so i called it liltman productions :roll:

thank you in advance!

Kev

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Post 3+ Months Ago

HI,

Been looking over your site, the main area seems to be alinged to the left, should it not be in the centre as it looks a little odd?

The general layout is nice but I seem to be stuck looking at the back ground :)

I think there is to much red as well, it seems to be taking over the page a bit to much, maybe add a little less red.. splodges? :)

Every time I hover over a link my mouse changes into a "move" icon, is this on purpose? It's not a bad thing really, could confused some simple poeple (like me) :)

Nice all in all, maybe in need of a few tweaks?

JP
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Post 3+ Months Ago

thanx for the feedback, yer its meant to do that when you move over a link, and there is a bit too much red splodges i just donno wah it will look like when i take a few off, good point though i will consider taking some off[/quote]
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Post 3+ Months Ago

forgot to mention bout centering everything, I don't like it when things are center because the text looks horrible but it might be a possibility, also i could use a "blockquote" that looks pretty nice, thanx for the comments
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Post 3+ Months Ago

Same here! Layout seems pretty nice, but there's wayyy to much play for my taste. Too much red, too much action for the eye.
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Post 3+ Months Ago

Yeah, it kinda hurt my eyes a little. i would reduce the amount of red and either introduce another colour or use more of an existing colour.
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Post 3+ Months Ago

thanx, i will definatly reduce the red then, thanx all

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