SITE REVIEW: http://www.perfect-smileys.com

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Post 3+ Months Ago

hi my little brother makes a site.... (we are from germany ;)=
every day it looks better, perhaps you can give some feedback what
he can make better...the design, the colors---- everything

thanks for every feedback


http://www.perfect-smileys.com
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What is the purpose of this site? Icons or something?

Maybe you can give us a little more information.
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Post 3+ Months Ago

first off, i like the left hand nav idea except you need to add alternative text to the images.

the header needs to have your site name to give the site definition. also include some of the actual content images you;re offering not just random ones!

shrink that MSN image on the homepage to get rid of that horizontal scroll.

give a proper introduction on the homepage.

that''ll do for now ;)
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Well, to be honest it looks like a little brother put it up. Not that thats a put down. :) several things:

1. The home page should have his about information and site definition on it. That messanger pic over text just looks plain messy.

2. Put your site name on your header. So people know where they are at.

3. I dont really like the header text (Tims World, Downloads, etc. you know, the yellow words) They look like they came out of word clipart or something.

4. there are some language and spelling errors I noticed:

Tims World: 2 errors
Downloads: 1 error

This sentance needs to be repaired:
Quote:
I think the most important think for user of my smiley-designs
is, that you must have the MsnMessenger, to be able to
use my smiley-designs.
you have "think" twice, and it is redundant.
try this:
Quote:
I think the most important thing for the users of my smiley-designs, is that you must have the MsnMessenger to be able to use them.


5. I dont think that iframe is necessary. Everything fits nicely on your page, putting it in an iframe makes it looks messy. You really dont need it.

LOL ill stop now :D. Its not a bad site, clean it up a bit, and you could have a fun little site goin on!
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Eh... I think there should be an about page. And sorry, but the graphics' quality seem really low and the site is a bit unprofessional-looking. I think it'd be better if the menu were not all graphics and the quality was better/less compression.
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First thing that came to my mind when I first started reading the text was that it reeked of spam. Very boring and uniformative text welcoming the user.

I do realize you're from Germany...but the text towards the bottom was not proper English.

Sorry...but keep trying!
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Well the text on the buttons does not fit (looks at "times world & downloads" The buttons look like the presets from photoshop which is not a bad thing just does not look like any effort went into it.

The banner looks orignal althought it doesnt look like the theme has been continues anywhere else.

I agree with what all the other people said about introducing the site so that people know what your site is about and what it contains.

If i visited your site i think i would cross it out by accident thinking that is a pop up for ebay.
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I dont understand what the banner has to do with the site! Maybe a description on the Home page about the site would help users understand what the page is about. I agree with SHARK SHARK, you need to correct the spelling errors. I am just a lil confused with the layout of the site.
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Post 3+ Months Ago

(im from germany my english is not very well ;)..
i try to make it a little bit proffesional...a good friend help us...
what do you mean with descrption..?.i think if a user come on my site, he will see that i make msn emoticons for the messenger....
i make a new logo with the text : top msn emoticons..do you
think its necasseray to make a description to understand what the site is about...? i make a help site and info.... for better understanding...
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I Like it!!!! I still dont think you need the iframe on the site, but hey that up to you guys :D . I like that background and I like the header. It looks like a fun site, I think you could have some fun with it. Good luck!

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