SITE REVIEW: makemoneydigitalcamera.com

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Post October 22nd, 2008, 2:46 am

Hi all please could you review a new site I'm in the process of setting up / improving but I'm not sure whether to add to the front page or maybe move some fo the content onto additional pages as its quite long to scroll down.

http://www.makemoneydigitalcamera.com

I have a lot more content to add over time, I'm planning to update at least once a week but I'm not sure whether to adjust the front page to take this into account or just to add more pages

Thanks for any input

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Post October 22nd, 2008, 2:46 am

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Post December 8th, 2008, 9:50 am

Hello,

First, this is my 1st post here, and I give honest comments.

The site is at a very early stage, so there cannot be much to comment on.

1/ I like text to be justified, I think it looks nicer.
2/ The top banner seems to be the ultimate minimum. You should have a more exciting banner.
3/ use more css code; for example in lists such as "The possibilies", you repeat attributes many times instead of using id="..."
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Post December 8th, 2008, 10:51 am

Throw a bit more design in there. Use this as inspiration - sites can look so exciting these days!! :D

also it spreads out pretty wide on a large monitor - you might want to place it all inside a centered wrapper...
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Post December 8th, 2008, 4:29 pm

I'd add a way to navigate throughout the site. Perhaps a north navigation menu?
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Post December 9th, 2008, 5:59 am

- You should have a very nice background sort of like a masterpiece of photography to blend with your topics.

- A better logo is needed. You cannot have a camera as your logo.

Just put other content in different pages when you already add sub sub domains so that your home page wouldn't look like a blog.

Good luck on your site!

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