SITE REVIEW: Need help to help. and fresh opinions.

  • Trucker
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Post 3+ Months Ago

Hi, my site is a new 5-month old site. I'd appreciate very fresh opinions about this site that I worked for so hard.

Secondly, I also need help if you could review my site and suggest an approach how to solicit donations for a good cause, particularly if I don't have a free ebook to reciprocate the donation.

I have a paypal account and know how to set it up.

Here's the site: http://www.Arizona4Pinoys.com

I'd really appreciate any and all comments and suggestions here.

Sincerely,
George
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  • gr8grmr
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I found it informative yet busy. I found the all the bold distracting. It is nice, but too busy for me. Perhaps more pages to contain the content? Just food for thought. It defineately made me think of AZ as a more livable place. My experiences have been of hot, hotter, and can't breathe. The pics really helped as well. Maybe add more pics of attraction, events...
  • donalduck_sg
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Trucker wrote:
Hi, my site is a new 5-month old site. I'd appreciate very fresh opinions about this site that I worked for so hard.

Secondly, I also need help if you could review my site and suggest an approach how to solicit donations for a good cause, particularly if I don't have a free ebook to reciprocate the donation.

I have a paypal account and know how to set it up.

Here's the site: http://www.Arizona4Pinoys.com

I'd really appreciate any and all comments and suggestions here.

Sincerely,
George


I think your link is confusing.
you should probably put abstract for the website.
i mean goal of your website. so when people read you abstract and understand what you doing.
  • oppiweb
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Trucker wrote:
Hi, my site is a new 5-month old site. I'd appreciate very fresh opinions about this site that I worked for so hard.

Secondly, I also need help if you could review my site and suggest an approach how to solicit donations for a good cause, particularly if I don't have a free ebook to reciprocate the donation.

I have a paypal account and know how to set it up.

Here's the site: http://www.Arizona4Pinoys.com

I'd really appreciate any and all comments and suggestions here.

Sincerely,
George


I wanted to give you a sincere review but no page opened when I clicked your link...maybe your server was down at the time....or is it the way you keep that best kept secret? :) Just joking....all sites are sometimes out of reach I am sure.
  • Trucker
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Post 3+ Months Ago

Thanks for all your time to review my site.

g8grmr, what did you mean by 'busy'? Please expound on this.

donaldduck_sg, sorry to confuse you but my site has a target niche. I already edited the first line of my homepage. Thanks.

oppiweb, can you take a look at my site again? I'd appreciate it.

To others who can help to suggest, I'll pay it forward if I can.

All the best,
Trucker
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I think your website is full of the Pictures, its bad for accessible Website

Good Luck and make your web accessible

Sorry for my Englisch
  • Henryct
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Post 3+ Months Ago

I would change the left column yellow and the sky blue you used in the boxes. Those colors look old fashion to me. Look like a 16 color video card. I would also remove the boxes borders.

The left column is wider than the menu, and since they use different colors (yellow and brown) it looks strange to me.
  • 02cordellj
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I think the that the home page has a bit too much information. I think it should just have some information about your company, and then allow the user to navigate their way around the site.

I also suggest a new, more professional looking banner. The current one seems a bit too clip-art. Another thing i would do to change the banner, is definitely take out the photos in the banner.
  • Trucker
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Thanks Henryct and 02cordellj. I'll try to experiment on more colors and shorten my homepage.

I look forward to getting more reviews please. I'll pay it forward by trying to visit your site too. :)

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