SITE REVIEW: V7 New features.

version 7 now. New features.
(january 25,2004)

http://www.plutunium.com

I've been refreshing for awhile and I get nothing...

G'day,

Took about 5 mins for me get page fully loaded,
then clicked on 'artwork' & gave up after another 5 mins.

I am on 56k dial up from Australia.
What I saw looked promising, but obviously taking me too long
to persevere.

OzDave

Looks good but you have to finnish off the edges better. Try center aligned?

Also cell padding or   where there is text in a table.

Potentially a very striking web site on the cards here.

wow quite a unique looking site.
great artwork
great color work
but some pages seem a bit outta centre and the load time is a bit long
otherwise i like it

I am really liking a lot of the abstract compostitions definitely keep those coming.

Im not quite so sure about the layouts and navigation tho...
Maybe u could make the backgrounds seem more like a part of the whole rather than just a cool looking distant background.

Think once u get everything to gel right u could have a nice site on ur hands

It's a pretty stunning graphic, unfortunately having a background that stands out like that also makes the foreground text very hard to read, could I suggest somehow laying it out so the background is only visible when not behind text, or perhaps toning it down a little.

The graphics are certainly lovely, but the navigation could use a bit of work. The main navigation problem is the Artwork section, as there is no link back to the main page. As for the Artwork section itself...linking to directories with only a file name to go by is not a very good way to showcase your work. Your artwork seems to be the focus of the whole website, yet it is not organized very well.

Apart from that, the only other thing that I must comment on is the white text on top of the graphical background. Seldom is text legible on anything besides a solid background, and it's not on that background that you're using.

You're getting there!

yeah I am going to add the links to the artwork page, and i will display my artwork without directories, just once im not lazy! thanks for your reviews everyone!

Any more?

UPDATED TO V3! I didn't like the other one!

You might want to use this in your HTML




It will centre your pages so it will look a lot better than being on the side

PS: I got a popup somewhere along the way... anyways i didnt see it cuz my blocker stopped it ....popups are bad dude

This sites not working for me

The page cannot be displayed

You might also wanna pay for a domain name, tk's kinda n00bish and display's popups for its services

Hi,

I DO understand that you are using the address

http://jconnolly.tk/

instead of

http://www.zacknetwork.net/xeniumx/PluTunium/home.html

But why don't you get a .com address? It's cheap less than 100 Dkr. a year at

http://www.gratisDNS.dk

Kind Regards
Chikaboo.com

pop ups = bad thing eek, saw the .tk provider and was waiting for popups, the site is dark and simple basically. i dont like the way ur art work is viewed in a parental directory also your portfolio page is hard 2 read... my opinions anyway.. sorry for the negitive comments