SITE REVIEW: V7 New features.

  • PluTunium
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version 7 now. New features.
(january 25,2004)

http://www.plutunium.com
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I've been refreshing for awhile and I get nothing...
  • OzDave
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G'day,

Took about 5 mins for me get page fully loaded,
then clicked on 'artwork' & gave up after another 5 mins.

I am on 56k dial up from Australia.
What I saw looked promising, but obviously taking me too long
to persevere.

OzDave
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Looks good but you have to finnish off the edges better. Try center aligned?

Also cell padding or   where there is text in a table.

Potentially a very striking web site on the cards here.
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Post 3+ Months Ago

wow quite a unique looking site.
great artwork
great color work
but some pages seem a bit outta centre and the load time is a bit long
otherwise i like it
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I am really liking a lot of the abstract compostitions definitely keep those coming.

Im not quite so sure about the layouts and navigation tho...
Maybe u could make the backgrounds seem more like a part of the whole rather than just a cool looking distant background.

Think once u get everything to gel right u could have a nice site on ur hands
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It's a pretty stunning graphic, unfortunately having a background that stands out like that also makes the foreground text very hard to read, could I suggest somehow laying it out so the background is only visible when not behind text, or perhaps toning it down a little.
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The graphics are certainly lovely, but the navigation could use a bit of work. The main navigation problem is the Artwork section, as there is no link back to the main page. As for the Artwork section itself...linking to directories with only a file name to go by is not a very good way to showcase your work. Your artwork seems to be the focus of the whole website, yet it is not organized very well.

Apart from that, the only other thing that I must comment on is the white text on top of the graphical background. Seldom is text legible on anything besides a solid background, and it's not on that background that you're using.

You're getting there! :)
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yeah I am going to add the links to the artwork page, and i will display my artwork without directories, just once im not lazy! thanks for your reviews everyone!

Any more?
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UPDATED TO V3! I didn't like the other one!
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You might want to use this in your HTML

Code: [ Select ]
<div align="center">



It will centre your pages so it will look a lot better than being on the side :D
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PS: I got a popup somewhere along the way... anyways i didnt see it cuz my blocker stopped it ....popups are bad dude
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This sites not working for me

The page cannot be displayed

You might also wanna pay for a domain name, tk's kinda n00bish and display's popups for its services
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Post 3+ Months Ago

Hi,

I DO understand that you are using the address

http://jconnolly.tk/

instead of

http://www.zacknetwork.net/xeniumx/PluTunium/home.html

But why don't you get a .com address? It's cheap less than 100 Dkr. a year at

http://www.gratisDNS.dk

Kind Regards
Chikaboo.com
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pop ups = bad thing eek, saw the .tk provider and was waiting for popups, the site is dark and simple basically. i dont like the way ur art work is viewed in a parental directory also your portfolio page is hard 2 read... my opinions anyway.. sorry for the negitive comments
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I can't read the top buttons very well, might want to make those bigger.
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Thanks for reviews on the V3 of my website! any more people?
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nice job, you keep changing ur site....for the best that is..

on my browser it appeared out of center, not sure why though.

try centering it more.
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lol, It's not supposed to be centered.





and if you want to get into detail on why i didn't center it: (I am just making this up off the top of my head>>>)

I believe that the norm. for sites is to center it. Because i am weird I like to have things off center. Yes, I do. Even in my own band that i have, They dress in black, I dress in red and tiedye. lol


ps, There is one thing i am normal about. I LOVE CHICKS! (girls, women, ladies. All the same)
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lol, nice comeback...


i still recommend centering it :P
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*EDIT again*

VERSION 6 NOW AND NEW HOST! (HOSTED BY UNFLUX! HTTP://WWW.UNFLUX.NET)


HTTP://WWW.PLUTUNIUM.COM
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Woo. I might be getting a new host, if my dad allows me! (I dont know if i am allowed to say who.. but am i?)


so everything will show up and i will have a forum if everything works out and my dad approves of the new host.
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:shock: the yellow burns my eyes out, horible colour!
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lol. Thank you for at least giving me feedback lol! I was just going for something differen't. But thanks! :lol:
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VERSION 6 NOW!
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re V5

I like the concept, and the Yellow isn't bad, but the light grey on yellow is a little hard to read for me. Nice combination, but perhaps a bit darker grey text. I don't see consitancy in the border. Is that intentional?

Looking at your journal, the text also seems to get a bit hard to read over the grid. The color works, but perhaps increase the font-weight to 600 or 700.

P.S> nice gift on the VicFirth sticks. I remember those were the only ones I would buy when I was younger.
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I agree with everyone that says that the site is very good. Where did you get your template. I missed it if you said that you made it in dreamweaver. Where did everyone get the .tk site from. I saw that .com site then i scroll down and people are saying that they saw .tk
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I made the template myself. I made the graphics, and i coded everything myself. And unflux is hosting me. And i still gotta pay for http://www.plutunium.com
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its a nice site, but if possible make it look good for all resolutions (the higher ones)

at 1280 res its fairly hard to read due to the font being so small.

Keep that in mind
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version 6 now!! check it out!


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