SITE REVIEW: Nucleo's Domain - Revamp

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Post 3+ Months Ago

I was concerntrating on the main aspects
professional
and
clean

I got the professional and clean aspect correct....but it was far too clean, too much white

well, i started again and I think I have cracked it, C&C please

http://www.nucleo.co.uk
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much much better. I love the red and white and greys together. easy nav, simple site to follow and that's what you want, so the work speaks for you.

you have 1 broken link on the wallpapers page.
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i'll fix the link ;)
and thanks for the comments

\\*edit, all fixed now
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Wow, that looks really good man. I love the layout. Its nice and clean and is easy to read everything. Good Job!
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thanks :)
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LOL Nucleo, you change your site as often as I change mine! I thought I was the only one who did that!

Your site looks good. Nothing wrong I could find. Basically another great work by Nucleo :D
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I do like that better. Much better in fact.

I would suggest this. On your images page, you say this:
Quote:
This is the work that I have done with the various programs stated


However, for the designs you did for my company, the quote:
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This is the work that I did for other business' and customers


Should be separated by a space or two from your other design work. It's a little hard to distinguish the breakpoint between your own designs and the other work you've done. There shouldn't be an apostophe after business' -- it should be businesses, or just shorten it to either Customers, or Clients.



That's the only thing that jumps out at me.
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thanks ATNO, I have made some changes to that page
http://www.nucleo.co.uk/portfolio.html
does that look better?
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*smiles -- yep -- that's much more distinct, although Corperation is spelled Corporation... *smiles

I suppose it's expected to see some spelling errors in forums, posts and such, but when you are doing your own or client's sites, make sure you have a dictionary by your side and/or a good spellcheck and ALWAYS use it.

Believe me -- clients ALWAYS catch your typos and spelling errors, no matter how hard you try to get them perfect.

//I even edited this post 3 times to correct mine. I think I have it right now! *lol
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ya what....
I dont see it! :roll:

*Mouse zooms over to ftp program..*

bah!

nothing wrong.... :oops:
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Post 3+ Months Ago

hey Nucleo

I like your site :?
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thanks
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wow Awesome! loads sort of slow on my pc though. i need to get Bryce.
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nice layout, cept dun like the part where i click on the link, it turned blank :oops:
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:hmm: ....what do ya mean?
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Post 3+ Months Ago

Nucleo:

Great site. Very nice layout. Good colour scheme and I LOVE your graphics.

A few improvements you should consider:

1. Make it validate as XHTML. You need a doc type declaration and a few minor revisions to make it valid. Check out: http://validator.w3.org/ to validate your entire website.

2. The main problem I see is your writing. It doesn't seem to flow very well and could use a few revisions. If you would like, I could suggest some changes.

That's pretty much it. Excellent work. I think if you improve on some of the wording and start building a reputation, you will definitely receive some customers.
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Well done nucleo.

Awesome graphics and colors. Easy navigation.

But there is not much information about who the designer actually is. What kind of company or service provider he represents. A seperate contact and about page are indespensible imho.

And that link...is it supposed to be Quota(out of place in this context)? or did you mean Quote? The page is named quote.htm but you are saying it as quota in the link and in the content also.


What bowling jeh was referring to was I guess the onclick image not being preloaded/not loaded quick enough.
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http://www.nucleo.co.uk/images/ funny :lol: Sites looking good Nucleo, the 3d graphics seem to being growing more and more intense, but... you seem to be stuck on this sharp, twisted art form. :?: Good stuff but its all begining to look the same... The page loads nice and quick and the simplicity of navigation is perfect.. Having a horizontal menu works great on the page, better then the old one vertically. I also like the point that there is also no scrolling up and down to view things, or if that's just in my resolution.... :o

Good work
8-10

Later
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I like the design a lot. I've been looking into deisngs that specify the width...I've always been afraid of someone having a crazy-high resolution and my site being 80% white space and 20% itty bitty content. The more I look however, the more I feel a static-width design is for the best.

I think the buttons could be a little snazzier...they seem almost flat right now. The rest of your site has depth...why not the buttons?

All in all I would say the design is nice. Oh also...maybe a darker background color like a dark grey or something...so it is offset from the grey of the design.
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who dug this one up lol
thanks for the comments guys. I finally got into google, so i am hoping for some customers.
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I dug for it :P
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ok i found 1 error

Quote:
Some of Nucleo's Domain's Various Website Layouts
now click the first image. then click the second image. they are the same image when they are supposed to be different
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:thumbsup: Your work in general gets better every time I see it, at this rate you'll be swamped with clients in no time.
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Post 3+ Months Ago

i have had some major trouble with my site
someone hacked my forums and deleted everything, so my host has rolled everything back with a backup file, so i have to update everything.
sorry

thanks for the comments, i will fix that image link ;)
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Post 3+ Months Ago

switched the forum off, and fixed the image links, and added a few pieces to portfolio...
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Post 3+ Months Ago

Greetings,

Very nice looking site. You might want to check out netmechanic.com and use their free image optimizing tool. Your logo is too large and takes awhile to load.
You may wish to shrink down your thumbnails on your portfolio page too.

Your work is awesome, but you the site needs a little speeding up.

Overall, great job.
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Post 3+ Months Ago

Very nice site, simple layout really easy to nav, and you have some good images. I really like how the shadows go outside of the layout and on to the background of the site, it gives the feeling as if the site doesnt really have any borders. I really like your wallpapers, they are very nice, what program do you use, they look to be either 3Dstudo, or Bryce?

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