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SITE REVIEW: one of these please

  • assasin3k
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Post 3+ Months Ago

Hello, please review 1 of the first 4 sites that u can found on

http://www.white-elf.com
10x
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  • Foxy
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Post 3+ Months Ago

I dont think you posted the minimal 3 posts, It says a real Review, not "hey, Nice site. " to that extent..

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good idear
  • assasin3k
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Post 3+ Months Ago

Sorry but i was in rush,i must sleep
I promise u that i will review almost all the sites here, sorry :(
Excuse me, TOmorrow i will review sites
  • digitalMedia
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Post 3+ Months Ago

assasin3k: I've restored your thread, for now, pending any review b_heyer wishes to do.

Feel free to restore your links and title (REVIEW:www.mysite.com or REVIEW:site name). Thanks.
  • b_heyer
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Post 3+ Months Ago

Looks good.
  • assasin3k
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Post 3+ Months Ago

thank u B, but i need some reviews so i can improve it
  • madmonk
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Post 3+ Months Ago

hello. some errors on yr index page. will come back n review another time.
  • assasin3k
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Post 3+ Months Ago

I fixet the problems, some mysql error from one database
  • MikeGibbs
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Post 3+ Months Ago

Hi,

Well - first impressions are I like this - even though you've got issues with missing links / images (no doubt you'll correct them shortly).

What I'm trying to work out is why I like it ...

1) I don't like spash pages - which your home page looks like at first. But it actually is an intruiging layout that made be want to click on one of the options!

2) The navigation / search is very quirky and strangely laid out(Optical Illusions is the example I'm using). But again, it's suitably different to be ok.

3) Actually, I think it's the subject matter that's the key. Stuff like optical illusions always get people interested and it's something I havn't seen online before.


Some negatives ...

1) Hate the navigation when it pop's up a new window. I'm clicking because I'm done with that page, I've got a back button and I expect that the page I go to has the same navigation at the top too.

2) I used the 'Optical Illusions' in my first pass, but going into the other categories I don't like the different layouts (if they were all quirky it would be cool, but many look like dull content management pages).

3) There's not a consistent theme here - why ringtones and optical illusions? What is the theme of the site so that it sticks in my mind and I come back?

Anyway, what do I know as someone who's been looking for 10 minutes and you've clearly spent many hours on this? :wink:

Good luck with it.

Cheers,

Mike
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Post 3+ Months Ago

I personally have a big problem with entrance pages such as yours. Frankly, as a single site, it's confusing. Every link from the splash goes to a different look and feel.

I say put some content up front. A little bit from all of your sites, I think. Give the sites similar look and feels. There's just no continuity.

Otherwise, it's kind of hard to review your site...because it's 6 sites.

:D
  • assasin3k
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Post 3+ Months Ago

thank u verry much
I wanted to be different sites.
And i like de idear of some content from all pages on the index page, yes thats nice, ill try to do that and then make what other ppl tell me here :)

10x a lot for your time to review it.

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