SITE REVIEW: One-Thing.org (Redesigned)

i have redesigned the site please comment on it i know alot of pages are not working and the guestbooks table has messed up but please review the design if there is any thing wrong with it any errors e.c.t

One-Thing.org

The 'enter' page with the "set one-thing.org as your homepage" looks unprofessional.

When you do enter, the main page says nothing about the purpose of the site. What does the website want to accomplish?

The menu on the left is straightforward and easy to understand - that's good

Regarding the "terms of use" and "disclaimer" on your site - have the legality of these ever been tested? (I'm just curious)

lol the terms or use and disclaimer havent been tester lol but there just incase and thanks for the help everyone more please

color scheme good, enter page mite send people away because u wanna no wots its about as soon as u get thr if u aint been thr before, and u have some pages which go no where! remove the links or get those pages up! and the forum is a totaly differnt colr n it looks bad in the frame, no offense, change the color scheme or make it open in a new window.

uther wise ur site has a lot of potential

there is no forum and thanks.

I like the color scheme, but generally I have a thing for lime on black. The site has the appearance of being simple and focused, which is good.

I don't see the point of opening a window for the "full story"; I expected it to open another page. All links should be made to act normally.

Most of your links are greeny, but your news page has blue links.

There's no need for frames, and they should be removed due to their disadvantages.

The marquee on your guestbook page (scrolling text) is something that died out in 1997 for good reason; it is more user friendly to let the visitor read text at his or her own pace, and it can be distracting when the user wishes to read something else.

It is a good idea to use grammar everywhere.

lol i havent got round to changing the link colour on the news page and i dont see any thing wrong with the full story popup i didnt find that looked verygood when it opened in the frame true the maruquee did die alongtime ago ill take it off thanks for the help

Your link doesn't work it says under construction?

o yeah im redesigning the site so no need to comment again i will ask for a nother review when i have done the new layout and design

remember to ask for a new review in this one creating a new one will just get your new one locked

All I could see was

One-Thing is underconstruction due to viewers that cannot view certain things will be running soon


I take it that it is being updated!

The main page is way to dark, I do like the chocolate and gold theme but lighten the background up it up a bit.

The ones above was the ones from the old layout so please comment i need feedback people!

can some one review my site please?

Well, I don't really know where to start. The overall site is way too dark and the yellow is way too bright. All the borders really take away the look of the site. The text is near impossible to read, I had to highlight it to see what you were saying. Grey on black and black on yellow isn't a very good combination in my opinion. All the text is meeting the borders. Padding comes to mind. There's a good bit to work on at the moment.