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SITE REVIEW: my personal page

  • croft15
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Post 3+ Months Ago

hi so please can u comment my personal page?
please don't comment menu , I know that it is not nice and I'm working on it, but i don't have enought time,


http://www.javo.profitux.cz

thanks
  • theak
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Post 3+ Months Ago

Its okay, there's nothing wrong with it, its just not very exciting. There are a million other sites that follow the same format, centralized text, image border on both sides, image at the top.

Also your CSS has an error...

Quote:
19 div.main Property _height doesn't exist : 100%
  • croft15
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Post 3+ Months Ago

theak wrote:
Its okay, there's nothing wrong with it, its just not very exciting. There are a million other sites that follow the same format, centralized text, image border on both sides, image at the top.

Also your CSS has an error...

Quote:
19 div.main Property _height doesn't exist : 100%


thanks for an opinion , hmmm U write that "its just not very exciting" , so what should I do? I don't have any inspiration now,

// that CSS, it's not an error , it's Internet explorer hack ,
  • SpooF
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Post 3+ Months Ago

Looks nice man! I just wish I could read it :)
  • solaris
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Post 3+ Months Ago

The side images are kind of out of place. IMO I would try a lighter color outside the side images, instead of a black on either side. It makes the image itself stand out way too much to be useful. I would just as soon take them out, mostly because they serve no purpose.

I can't give you any critique on how well the theme fits, because I can't really gather an idea of what the site is being used for. As far as the detail in the design, I don't see a whole lot of effort being put forth. If you were going for minimal, you hit the nail on the head.
  • gnatik
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Post 3+ Months Ago

Design looks a little messy and out of date. Hard to talk about content as I can not speak the language.

The menu at the top looks a little too small. Perhaps bring the menu over to the left side navigation.

The huge empty spaces on the irght and the left don't really work for me, neither does the depressing black colour. Does not really encourage me to stay and explore further.
  • Jak
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Post 3+ Months Ago

It's just a little plain. You have to put something on the site that people will remember, and make them come back.

I don't understand what is written, but maybe bring it to life a little. Maybe a nice effect seeing as the colors are pretty dark.
  • CircleOfLinks
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Post 3+ Months Ago

i had no id what i was doing there, the site looks a little squashy maybe widen it a little. a few colours wont hurt to,,
  • croft15
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Post 3+ Months Ago

thanks for opinions, I've written that it is my personal page , so I don't won't to have a perfect graphic page, becouse I tried to present my style and opinions there, but thanks for advices,

//btw solaris and gnatik, very helpful advices , thanks, I will improve it when I'll have som time
  • croft15
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Post 3+ Months Ago

I've just made a 2 web designes , so what are your opinions?
// I don't want to make another topic
the first oneImage
the second oneImage

// please write your opinions mainly about the first one , I'm still working on it
thx
  • Chaunte
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Post 3+ Months Ago

its ok. not my style, but fine.
in a different language, so for me its hard to tell. :)
  • SpooF
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Post 3+ Months Ago

Ive seen that lime around here before! lol

http://www.solaris.bluesfear.com/

Is that on a free stock photo place?

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Im not to fond of the first one but the second one is nice. Maybe its just that lime :)
  • kailyn_morgan
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Post 3+ Months Ago

hey,

could you please let me kno as to which language have you written your personal site in? I can't understand it at all.... or it would nice if you can attach a translator button with it... as then u wld b able to get better reviews from more people rather than just getting from people saying that sorry we couldnt understand wht u hav written...

hope u wld do d needful... :)


Cheers,
Kailyn Morgan
http://www.epurplemedia.co.uk
  • croft15
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Post 3+ Months Ago

to SpooF : yea :) i've found it on http://www.sxc.hu ,
btw so what would u change on the first one?
kailyn_morgan : it's in my mother language (Slovak) , but when I'll have some time I'll translate it,
  • matt@aylist
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Post 3+ Months Ago

Yeah looks s'ok

Wasn't jaw droppin, but then neithers mine dude!
  • dannyff
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Post 3+ Months Ago

Sorry for another language.
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Stranka to je celkom pekna, len ta reklama hore dost sux :) nato ze mas 15 sa celkom snazis :) len tak dalej.
  • Marturion
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Post 3+ Months Ago

I would suggest a few more pictures, maybe a different one on each of your pages, but in the same general area as your main picture. That would make things more interesting as you move from place to place. That would also allow your users to have a differen't "feel" as you the navigate to different areas.

Also you may want to consider some sort of form for people to contact you instead of just the regular "mailto." The general "mailto" is really bot friendly, and you could end up with a lot of spam.

Your css looks pretty clean, you may want to comment it a bit more, but that's more of a personal preference thing. I hope this helps a bit!
  • croft15
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Post 3+ Months Ago

yea thanks ,
to marturion : yea interesting idea,
so I'm about to make some articles , mail form and login in PHP for me ,
thanks for opinions

btw (sorry , in my mother language :D ):
2 dannyff : to som nevedel ze tu najdem aj nejakeho slovaka :) super
btw tam reklama je od hostingu a neplanujem na osobnu stranku prevadzkovat plateny hoosting , zda sa mi to zbytocne
a ich sluzby sa mi vidia

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