SITE REVIEW: Please review my templates (new LOOK)

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Post November 17th, 2007, 6:44 am

Nice design, I especially like the logo, so here are my suggestions.

- I am sure some has posted this but what's the deal with the tabs, in my browser I can't see the tabs names
- I am little confused on what your tagline "Web Components Store" has to do with Business Cards and Brochure templates, if you want to keep this you may want to call it Web Components Store and more, though I think the word store is redundant since people know you are selling something. How about web designs and more?
- Since you are selling templates you should think about putting a place to have people showcase their sites once they purchase this way you could trade links with other sites increasing your page rank and potential audience.

Good luck
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Post November 17th, 2007, 6:44 am

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Post November 17th, 2007, 6:54 am

Headers awful, ads stick out like a sore thumb. Fix those and you you will be getting somewhere.
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Post November 17th, 2007, 11:34 am

I agree that more could be done with the header - I still think (as do most other people it seems :) that the black square in the top right corner is strangely frustrating to look at - I keep expecting something to load there or suddenly appear. When it doesn't, I start to feel it's a glitch, i.e. that it's empty by accident and not on purpose.

I also agree with the above stating that 'web components' is a slightly unclear definition - I realise that 'web design store' is more common, and you'll have to face more competition on search engines, but I'd never guess that 'web components' meant 'website templates' on my own.
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Post November 21st, 2007, 3:49 am

Thank you every one i will do what i can to fix the problems
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Post November 23rd, 2007, 4:17 pm

very nice templates (i loved the Computer Store Website) but i would prefer that the previews points to view section.
i really don't like the header something more smooth with glassy effects will be perfect.
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Post November 24th, 2007, 2:48 pm

Fix the W3C validation errors on your site and on your templates... its your choice to do so but it is a good practice and also CEO friendly.

Also, it may be a good idea to put a directory search on the website so people could search for different categories of templates... such as "Real Estate", "Automobiles", etc... etc...

The logo seems out of place... I suggest you "blend it in" into the surroundings... my suggestion on it...

I looked through your site and my my... You misspelled a lot of stuff there... how do you not misspell the codes? :scratchhead:

I got an idea for you (:!:)... fix those misspelled words... Like you have What dose pagerank mean? or... we found some methedologies we love to share with you....

Is methedologies even a word? :scratchhead: google it and see the suggested spelling for that... the "Dose" is also out of place... perhaps you meant "Does"?

Those errors are on "Free Traffic" page... I am willing to bet you got other misspelled words on that page and on other pages as well... fix them... doesn't make the site look professional.

On a standard letter grading scale 9USA) I would probably assign you a C- more all of the misspelled and the logo that seems to be out of place... nothing harsh just my suggestion and rating which could go down to "D" if I was harsh on rating :shock:
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Post November 25th, 2007, 8:41 am

Bogey wrote:
also CEO friendly.

He meant SEO friendly
Let's leave all our *plum* where it is and go live in the jungle ...
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Post November 26th, 2007, 7:50 am

Thank you i will fix the errors
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Post December 2nd, 2007, 3:30 am

please check my new design for my store
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Post December 2nd, 2007, 4:38 am

Add to your meta information

Quote:
<meta name="robots" content="index,all" />


Good luck.

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Post December 2nd, 2007, 8:33 am

What about a search function?
Am I right that when you buy the template you will not get a website but just a .psd file? I would say that a bit clearer, because its not common...
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Post December 2nd, 2007, 12:18 pm

Looks good, but do you have a search feature? Might be useful
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Post December 8th, 2007, 9:29 am

Thank you every one I added more files

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