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How is the overall design of my website?

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    Nice! I like it
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    hmm, needs some work...
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    booo! sucks my grandma could have done better!
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    to basic, needs graphics!

SITE REVIEW: Savage Lands RPG GAME

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Post April 12th, 2004, 8:32 pm

alright i know it needs some work but i am trying to keep alot of graphics off of it because it is a text base game :)
http://www.bladesling.no-ip.com/test/
i would like you to sign up and go through the game a bit.. dont get addicted lols.. im serious :-p that is the beta version non released...
http://www.bladesling.com is the released version my players play on.. shhh dont tell them about the beta :-p trying to keep them out :-p want to suprise them with new stuff
when my players whine its usauly about the text being to dark, i brightend it a bit from v.2 is it good enough?
anyways.. sign up and check it out and tell me how it looks.. there are graphics inside, not much but some...
umm i would like you to look at the layout of the shops because they all are the same.. if you look at one you have basicly seen them all :-p
New Link Below
is the link
for your users names add a _o after it please and thank you
so my name would be blade_o instead of just blade... thanks for your replies ill be looking foward to them!

The new links are
http://www.bladesling.com/preview/
http://www.bladesling.com/preview2/

and the old site is
http://www.bladesling.com/sl/

I would like some opinions on preview one and two :D
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Post April 13th, 2004, 9:26 am

Clean and straight forward, so kudos for that, mate. However, me old eyes don't see blue text on a black background very well. Not a good combination for us geriatrics in the crowd.

Also, a few images might spice it up a bit without slowing down the load-time much.
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Post April 13th, 2004, 3:10 pm

yea i seem to get that blue text a bit brighter everyday lols.. everyone likes to whine about my blue text :-p thanks for the advice.. hmm did you sign up? cause there are a bit more images in the game... hmm i think i should realy spice up the outside of the webby lols make them think its all pimp inside :-p but for some people it reloads them images every time.. wow like my school macs do sometimes... evil i tell you!
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Post April 15th, 2004, 12:05 pm

How about a way to change the text colour (possibly with CSS or Javascript) and possibily the background colour. But the page is cleanly layed out and I like your restraint!
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Post April 15th, 2004, 4:24 pm

lols anymore info on to what color of text i should choose :-p just telling me that maybe i should change it doesnt help me :-p
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Post April 15th, 2004, 4:59 pm

This is to just elaborate my other post. I would put up some links that can change the colour. Say on that makes the text white and the boxes gray. And another link that might change it to say green.
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Post April 16th, 2004, 2:46 pm

hehe whats funny is that i have done that to one of my other sites... lols.. exact same format and everything... grey with white text.. LOL! erm I'm done now lols... reason why i didnt keep it... TO BRIGHT! lols.. i love the dark... but i might make it to where you can change the color to like green or something :) thanx.. ive though of it before.. but one thing i cant do is change the bg color :( to many things that have to do with that and would mess up otherwise.. but black and red.. black and green... black and white... umm yea.. i think thats all ill do in a for a color scheme :) v .4 all the way baby :-p anyways..
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Post June 14th, 2004, 3:46 am

alright.. I've done some work on it, still blue but it has more of a look to it instead of no images... it has like 3 :-p bg, tops, and header :-p haha.. anyways I still need help with it a bit :)
http://bladesling.com/preview/index.php
this is preview one..
http://bladesling.com/preview2/index.php
preview two
the only differece in the tops one is more room taking the other stats to the tops and the bottoms

:) thanks for the comments
and if you wish to see what it use to look like
http://bladesling.com/sl/
*still current til im finished*
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Post June 14th, 2004, 10:11 am

Nice page. I like the fact that's is straight forward with the user and provides a good looking interface. Nice job.

The only thing I would suggest is perhaps provide some imagery which fits the content of whatever page its on.

ex: Games page having a pic of a character

But make the size appropriate to the page though.

Thats just a suggestion, not something you should/have to do in my opinion.

Once again, nice job!
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Post June 14th, 2004, 10:32 am

did you look at both of them? preview 1 and 2 :-S really wanted an opinion on the differences :-p
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Post June 14th, 2004, 11:44 am

http://www.bladesling.no-ip.com/test/ did not work for me.

I was talking about the one that does work - http://www.bladesling.com
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Post June 16th, 2004, 7:53 pm

Hi, sorry about the new topic just everyone kept looking at the wrong page to view to the new review. I have done a little modifieing but the changes make it look great!
http://www.bladesling.com/preview/
http://www.bladesling.com/preview2/
the only differences are the tops
any other comments and suggestions even the bad ones are greatly appreciated
it is compared to:
http://www.bladesling.com/sl/
that is the old look...
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Post June 16th, 2004, 8:18 pm

The new look is very kewl... good job man :wink:
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Post June 16th, 2004, 8:44 pm

It just goes to show that a few subtle touches really can improve the look of a site (the old vs new versions).

The one critisms I have is that, although the text across the top has a lot more character than on the old site but it's a bit too dark too read clearly on my monitor, any chance you could brighten up a little.
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Post June 16th, 2004, 9:57 pm

Please keep your requests for reviews in your original reviews post. All you have to do is post your revisions and it will bring the post back to the forefront. There is no need to start another topic on it in a different board.
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