SITE REVIEW: SawanM

  • SawanM
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Post 3+ Months Ago

Please review my personal/commerical site

It is general stuff really nothing special

http://sawanm.info

Its URL framing http://sawan.byethost18.com

so please don't complain about the loading times
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  • Mativenga
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Post 3+ Months Ago

Layout looks great, but I don't like the idea of doing everything, you risk ending up a "jake of all treads and a master of none", I adivise specialising in your areas of interests so you can capture a targetted population.

You cant please everyone
  • contact7
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Post 3+ Months Ago

I clicked the "Widgets" link and saw the "french fries" movie. Really funny ;)
Generally I agree that it's a website about everything and nothing, something that I avoid.

You can put some video (fries?) on home page, this simply makes people stay on the website. And add some CTA (Call To Action) to it.
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Post 3+ Months Ago

Overall the graphics look good, but the announcement text could be scrolling more slowly. Also it is always good to add more content.

Regards,
http://earn-money-on-the-web.blogspot.com
  • ecuador
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Post 3+ Months Ago

I like the overall design, but there are some drawbacks you could work on:

HTML validity - 11 errors
The content below "welcome" & copyright should receive some padding, as it looks somewhat slammed against the border left and top.

Rest of it - fine :)
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Post 3+ Months Ago

Thanks for the feedback, its nice to hear Ive done something right :)

ecuador, please give the html code to fix this problem.

to contact7, the video is a flash file, some browser do not have the plugin for Adobe flash Player installed, therefore making the page really slow to load. This could lose potential people from looking through the whole website.
  • .amaZe
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Post 3+ Months Ago

The graphics look good, but I think the banner needs more work. You have some validity errors in your CSS and HTML. Other than that the rest is fine
  • SawanM
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Post 3+ Months Ago

I think the banner is suitable with the rest of the design.
  • SawanM
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Post 3+ Months Ago

I need more people to review my site!
  • ublog
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Post 3+ Months Ago

Overall the design look good, loading times too long
  • SawanM
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Post 3+ Months Ago

As I said its URL framing

use

http://sawan.byethost18.com
  • murcielagossi
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Post 3+ Months Ago

Nice site, I agree with the padding issue, it does look cramped. And like ecuador said make sure you validate your HTML + xHTML
  • pearl5
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Post 3+ Months Ago

the graphics look good, I like it. but it take too much time to load.
  • SawanM
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Post 3+ Months Ago

Ok, Ill try to fix the main title parts then.

Anymore stuff

Ive added error pages, custom of course

http://sawanm.info/404.shtml
  • SawanM
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Post 3+ Months Ago

Ok, Ive made a game

http://sawanm.info/killmonster/

try it!
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Post 3+ Months Ago

dang, my host is down.

I would have loved you to try it.

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