SITE REVIEW: A Silence Lost

  • the_Maven
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Post 3+ Months Ago

A Silence Lost

Spread the word.
  • daremedy
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Post 3+ Months Ago

Were you looking for a review or are you just promoting your site? :scratchhead:
  • Mas Sehguh
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Post 3+ Months Ago

WTF. WTF. WTF. WTF. WTF. WTF. WTF. WTF. WTF.

What am I typing WTF for? WTF is "x-mailing". Hand over the drugs I want some.

Also, ∴ is a symbol meaning "therefore." So your site reads "therefore a lost quote," "therefore a silence lost," "therefore a word to know."

You need to practice your persuasive writing.
  • darkermoon
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Post 3+ Months Ago

the_Maven wrote:
A Silence Lost

Spread the word.


I would consider this spamming. As for reviewing the site, I'm sorry but, I'd have to say that it's not very good at all. The text on the front page is kinda hard to look at for some reason.. I think it's the red and grey and black or something. Also, quite honestly, I don't know what the point of this site is or why anyone would want to visit it. I just looked again, why do the links change color to the same as the background after you click on them? how much less professional could that be? Lastly (since I'm spending too much time on this) what are with all of the symbols?
  • the_Maven
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Post 3+ Months Ago

i apologize for the spamming.

i changed the layout a little bit. the therefore symbol is gone. i think the text is easier to read.

the point of the site is basically a quick news fix.
  • darkermoon
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Post 3+ Months Ago

it's kind of a cool concept but for a site like this to ultimately work, you need to be more dynamic and grabbing news from other sites that allow you to through XML or something of the likes. Or, have other people posting.

EDIT:
had spelled ultimately wrong, lol.
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Post 3+ Months Ago

Your first mistake was using geocities. The font doesn't seem to fit. The colors don't really match. its not centered on my screen (1200x800 res).

Seems to be pretty good content tho, and thats the important part.
  • the_Maven
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Post 3+ Months Ago

i am glad there are people out there who can critique a site without using a diatribe. thanks for your help.

i do plan to upgrade sometime soon, the geocities thing is just a beta test, just to see how well it does.
i am glad you find the content informative. rock on bro.
  • sycofi5h
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hey i like it, well spread out only thing i am not confortable with is the Times New Roamn font i dont really like it.

my option though

-sycofi5h
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I just wanted to let everyone know that I have completely redesigned it, and in my opinion it looks a lot better than it did in its early stages. I would appreciate feedback of any kind. Thanks for all of your help. The link is below my signature.

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