SITE REVIEW: TaylorHewitt.com

Out-of-ten ratings are only fun when you give a 0/10 and explain how simple it is to turn it into a 10/10 anyway

Lol. I caught one of your 0/10's! But to your credit, you definitely make that 10 point climb sound easy.

Thanks guys I'll begin improving my site this weekend . Hope you like my first flash movie!

Sorry to double post guys, but I didn't think I should create a new topic lol. I've updated my site a bit and I wanna get the new reviews so please! I'd also like to know what you guys think of my two flash movies I made.

looks to me like you just added some advertisement to the top. Is that what your talking about?

Uhh no. That isn't an advertisement. It's a gay banner my host puts there.

I fixed the shoutbox, put some flash movies, cleaned up the site and put an archive for news, also added a section for flash movies to avoid clutter etc.

Ok well... I really don't like what you've done with your site, but i'm gonna give u some tips:

Your site lacks structure:
- Put some tables around the text with boards
Color scheme is a killer:
- Make table background a color that makes it less painful to read. Something like wat Ozzu has done.

If your under 14 I would say this is pretty good. If your older search the web for a nice template if nessecary or look up some good tutorials on web design.

Uhh I'm 15 lol. I don't plan on getting the colour scheme redone for a while, but what are u talking about anyway?

Well to put it simple it's hard to read the stuff on your site try puting boards arounds stuff if your not going to change the color scheme

If that were to be done, there's no need for mucking about with tables; there are already P elements there and the HTML doesn't need to be modified at all.

I'ld appreicate if people who are replying to things a say would be more specific I can't quite identify the problems in what I say unless you are more specific

What are you talking about? boards? sry...

I meant boarders but typed boards sorry

K how do i make boarders?

here check this site out Lissa Explains. Its simple and it's made just for kids. Everything there is simple enough for anyone to understand and it has all the stuff you would need to know.