SITE REVIEW: Teen Money

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Post September 10th, 2006, 10:22 am

hey guys

i have a site on teaching teens to make money and the value of money, i recently close down a gaming site because of loss of traffic...Tell me what u think

http://www.teen-money.blogspot.com
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Post September 10th, 2006, 11:04 am

I like the overall design, green color, and the way everything is organized.

That Google Adsense Ad might be too wide to fit in there though. Consider using a smaller width ad up there or increase the width of your design so the adsense ad fits in there.
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Post September 11th, 2006, 6:58 am

I like the idea, me being a Teen, might get some use out of it. BUT! It needs pictures or animations. Teens do not have the will to sit there for the legnth of the page only reading text. But good idea.

I like the color scheme very much. Just try for some pics or animations.

Good job.
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Post September 11th, 2006, 8:46 am

I do have to agree with Rageweaver on the picture and graphics. It needs at least a few so the site doesn't look so boring. I would also recommend fixing the grammatical errors on the site. You are speaking to teenagers, but I do think you could get quite a few adults visiting as well and you want to look professional. I would not take advice about money from someone who can't spell.
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Post September 11th, 2006, 7:20 pm

Alright added a couple of pictures( ill try too add 1 every article) spellchekd whatever i can find , soo what u give on 10 now?

Ps: Last comments made on my site pleased me very much and i find helped out alot...continue!
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Post September 12th, 2006, 3:40 pm

uhh anybudy?
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Post September 24th, 2006, 7:57 am

should i change from a blog to a website?what else should i include in my website?
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Post October 3rd, 2006, 8:07 pm

mafiaboy3 wrote:
should i change from a blog to a website?what else should i include in my website?


I haven't spent a lot of time at your website, but I think you have a really good topic. After all, what teen or anyone for that matter doesn't want to make money. I also like the appearance of your site. Green is a great color for a money making site$$$$ I like the way you have placed images in with your content as well. overall, a really clean, attractive looking blog. How about placing a skyscraper Google Adsense Ad on the left sidebar below your site navigation and links? I thin you would monetize better from your site if you did this. I would keep the blog if I were you. I know that I like reading a blog for a content based site more than a website. It also allows the reader to interact with the writer of the blog. Keep up the good work!

Christopher H.

Trying To Make Money Online Blog - http://tryingtomakemoneyonline.blogspot.com/
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Post October 5th, 2006, 5:01 am

I like the overall design and the colors. Very well organised.
I have to continue reading to tell you what I think about the "money making ideas"...
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Post October 5th, 2006, 11:37 am

Does nobody else see that this is just a blogger template?

Nobody?

Its a nice design but it looks like alot of other blogger blogs i have visited.
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Post October 6th, 2006, 10:15 pm

Is there anyway you could make the site more interactive? As much fun it is to read, if there were some interactive examples say for saving money, or passive income, it might do better.
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Post October 7th, 2006, 9:38 am

nice idea thanks, anything else i should add to the site, any tool/program?
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Post October 8th, 2006, 9:04 pm

Hi, its a nice design but it looks like a blogger site, change to website and you could have more options to play with. Like the topic thoe. colours are nice....
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Post October 9th, 2006, 11:49 am

If you got the time (which I think you have), check out how this website layout is done:

http://musicthing.blogspot.com/

The trick is to play around with the templates and understand how it is structured. To learn more, check out this website:

http://bloggeruniversity.blogspot.com/

I'm currently building a few blogspot based website/blog. Mostly derive from templates available and hand code it manually. Later...
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Post October 10th, 2006, 12:24 pm

well i don't really have any intention of changing the blogger them, freen is good cuz im talkin bout money and stuff, im also thinking of making a forum for my site.
What would you give site content on 10?
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