SITE REVIEW: The Liberation

The Liberation is an online text based RPG (Role playing game). It has only been up on the internet about 2 weeks, and is still in very early development. I got the scripts free of charge from mccodes.com, but since then have added many mods. You will have to sign up to see the extent of the site, don't worry there's no email activation! You can play straight away. If you need any help navigating around the site. Mail me in game (ID, 7). Don't be put off just because its a game, i really want lots of people to review so that i can get a broader view of what people the game attracts to, and also what i can do to improve it.

Don't hold back on your reviews

http://www.the-liberation.com

It's a funny game but the template needs some more graphics.

Ok, will work on that.
What do you mean by funny?

The sense of humor. Buying a 'plank' a beat a guard down.

OK!

the text is a little hard to read thats the first thing i noticed and it goes right to the login page?

Kind of plain... black on green background, everything centered...

There's a lot of wasted space. Also, having the login in the very center of the main page, without any explanation what you are about, IMHO could scare away an average user. The idea behind your website may be a good and interesting one but without a proper wrapper, and some embellishment won't sell.... I think you should work on the design a bit more.

Good luck with your site!

I think it need more graphics

Yeah, like a few images would lived up things quite a bit ...

Also ... w3c markup validator found 21 errors on your page ...

O and one more thing ... dont you just want to add soe rollovers please ...

It was A really Good Game
But It has Been Shut Down

This topic hasn't been touched since march ... no need to drag it up now. If you want to review some websites there are plenty of current ones. Also, make sure to provide in-depth reviews instead of a couple of words

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