SITE REVIEW: The Wedding Ceremony Portal

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Post June 12th, 2009, 8:34 pm

I am in the process of having a really feature packed wedding portal launched. In the mean while though, I have created a website place holder, that I want to start promoting, so that when the website is launched I will already be receiving traffic. Is there any thing that sticks out that I need to change while I do my initial marketing? Here is the link:

http://www.theweddingceremony.com
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Post June 12th, 2009, 8:53 pm

You seem to have got quite a bit of content ready but you really need to work on the design. For starters, you definitely need to change the colours: green and blue aren't exactly easy to read on a pink background. Also, I personally feel that entry pages (like the one on yours with an ENTER link) are annoying.
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Post June 13th, 2009, 1:11 am

The color, like a ton of bricks :D
There is a web-based tool out there for color palette generation, which helps you choose 'safe' colors, based off your preferred color. The colors that you are using now are really bad together. AH! I found the link: http://colorschemedesigner.com/

And i agree that entry pages are annoying. Make sure to choose a font, and stick with it throughout a majority of your content. The same goes for color. Otherwise visitors will feel lost or p*ssed.
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Post June 13th, 2009, 3:26 am

I agree with the other reviewers. I don't like the entry page or the site colours. Also the main photo at the top of the page appears to have been stretched making the people appear fat.
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Post July 3rd, 2009, 11:27 am

How come people here have 4 posts, then ask for their site to be reviewed? Kinda spam dontcha think?

I mean, real members of ozzu post more than 4 posts before asking for their site to be reviewed...
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Post July 3rd, 2009, 1:53 pm

The green bar has got to go.

Logo needs to be larger and central

I'm color blind but i think the colors need changing.:)

The links in navigation look old with the underlining and arrows.

Main text needs breaking up into smaller paragraphs.

Also all the extra space at bottom!
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Post July 10th, 2009, 7:22 am

nikifi wrote:
I am in the process of having a really feature packed wedding portal launched. In the mean while though, I have created a website place holder, that I want to start promoting, so that when the website is launched I will already be receiving traffic. Is there any thing that sticks out that I need to change while I do my initial marketing? Here is the link:

http://www.theweddingceremony.com

My opinion this site see good, you can seo for your keywork to get mome traffic !

Have luck !
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Post July 10th, 2009, 8:47 pm

Color purple on the left panel is distracting. Headings for the three images not clear enough. Consider changing the colors. Other then that, the contents inside the tabs on the left look pretty impressive.
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Post July 16th, 2009, 10:10 am

Simple,, almost too simple, but it works.

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