SITE REVIEW: Unfinished-Tales

  • Time Keeper
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Post 3+ Months Ago

Ok, Now i need to know some stuff about my site, its still kinda in the working process so the MAIN site still has some broken links

But the forum is fuly working and it has the RPG hack on it (Where you can battle other users for forum cash and buy spell and potions and stuff)

Anyways the site is basicly about peoples tallents (poems, Art, Stories and photos) and sharing them with other users to get an opinion and tips on improving it....

Its also a Gamer style Website.

http://Unfinished-Tales.servegame.com/ - This is the main site i want people to review on

http://Unfinished-Tales.servegame.com/vBulletin - Also id like people to have a look at my forums to see if any work needs doing

well im open to all opinions (may feel offended but ill get over it :-P )
  • Time Keeper
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Post 3+ Months Ago

OI, just because im a newbie doesnt mean you can ignore me and not help me,

I asked for a review on my site (more my forums tho)

And where is it?
I reviewed other peoples istes, why arnt i getting any "Constructive critisism"

Is it because of my screen name, because i suck that bad that you dont even want to comment.......

Well?
  • ejumblesale
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Post 3+ Months Ago

Hi,
I have tried looking at your site but the page cannot be displayed. Perhaps that is why no-one has replyed.
Anthony
  • lineleeder
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Post 3+ Months Ago

Yep. And, I don't mean to toot since I'm new too - but getting grumpy iddn't gonna help ;)

I'd love to take a look - but it's not working :( I'd like to see that RPG hack, never played around on one before.

Let us know when you get it working!
  • Time Keeper
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Post 3+ Months Ago

Its working now if ya wanna have a look!
  • BravoGolf
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Post 3+ Months Ago

It states that the site has been blocked :oops:
  • Nucleo
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Post 3+ Months Ago

The main site, I have seen the buttons elsewhere on a friends site :roll:

the part "Unfinished Tales" is very pixilated.

the horizontal buttons really need antialaising

the point where the horizontal buttons finish is 'different' that where it continues, because i am using 1280x1024

I think you should remove the "Share your work" text on the top image, would look better without imo, or in different colour to match

the forum is using a skin from extreme pixels... so its not worth reviewing really. :roll:

needs some improvement, but its a nice site.
  • madmonk
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Post 3+ Months Ago

I dont like the site at all. the nav buttons sucks.
  • liltman
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Post 3+ Months Ago

hi,

it's a nice layout but the gray box area is a bit empty, could maybe put something in there, also the links look like there going to do something but they don't, it looks like a flash layout to me but its not lol

the words "share your work" is also a bit hard to read

other than that its a decent site, and a good idea too :)

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