SITE REVIEW: Weapons Of US Military

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Post April 20th, 2008, 12:21 pm

as i said before it is currently under constructio so thats why there are so many differen chanes in style
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Post April 20th, 2008, 12:21 pm

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Post April 20th, 2008, 6:42 pm

My advice to you is to use what you've done on your first (home) page and apply it to every other page. All of the elements need to be sized differently in my opinion. You have all of these large gray blocks that are used for various things like links back or match info.

It appears as if you have no margins or padding between elements so I would add that if I were you.

I understand it's an ongoing project and I think it can turn out really well with some more work.
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Post April 20th, 2008, 11:44 pm

Your design is very slopy.. also your css code is very poor in being organizes, i would suggest CHANGING the layout.
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Post April 21st, 2008, 12:02 pm

On your special forces page... i think there is too much white in your footer, just an imho. Last 5 or more white lines in the footer are not necessary
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Post April 24th, 2008, 8:26 am

Find it very boring and not much to see ?
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Post April 24th, 2008, 8:44 pm

Its a good design for a military look site although the loads is a little bit slow.
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Post May 1st, 2008, 12:50 pm

This does not seem to be working. None of the buttons or links take me anywhere, and the layout is broken with some of the text overflowing to the right out of the screen.

I am using Internet explorer 7.

Good luck
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Post May 6th, 2008, 8:34 am

hey guys i have changed a lot on my site please let me know how else to improve it
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Post May 6th, 2008, 9:28 pm

should add more photo in you site
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Post May 9th, 2008, 8:10 pm

I think I reviewed this site before, but I came back and actually went through all of the navigation. Is it me or when you click "Equipment" "Weapons" and "Special Forces", it's like you are taken to another site. A site much worse. :) LOL. You have to be at least somewhat consistent with the design layout. Can I ask exactly the purpose of the site? If I click on some of the items, I get the feeling that is about Military Equipment. But when I look on the home page I see something about "matches". Is this a game of some sort? If I'm repeating stuff already said. It's because I have really bad ADD and I didn't read all of the other posts. Also, you gotta optimize your images. If not they load extremely slow. Also the sponors boxes are tooooo big. You don't want them to overshadow your site. And I think would place them a little further down the page. I couldn't get the "Contact" page to open at all. A rollover on the navigation would be really nice.
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Post May 13th, 2008, 3:17 am

The design is not really good but it don't look bad. Okay your site is currently updating .
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Post May 13th, 2008, 4:31 pm

LoL not much I can say on this site, I think everyone above me pointed out all the problems. This is obviously a template you downloaded and used. Nothing wrong with that its a great way to start learning design flow.

I think your home page is the best you got going so build off that make the rest of the pages look like that. This should be a dynamic website. Not sure if your using sever side scripting or just making this static.

I would suggest a book here.http://www.sybex.com/WileyCDA/SybexTitle/productCd-0782142796.html

This is good book that will help you design a site that is dynamic and teach ya some neat tricks to keep your pages constant. It will also teach ya some server side scripting.

On your home page you should deffenantly make those big gray side bar buttons much smaller. Its just way to over whelming and will distract your vistors from the content you have on the main page.

Your special forces page looks nothing like the rest of the site that again goes back to consistantcy. I'm trying my hardest to find something positive to say about this site, but its really hard. Not to discourage you, just keep working on things people mentioned and it will eventually come together.
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Post May 14th, 2008, 8:38 pm

"We are currently updating our site so please check back soon"

Even if this is temporary. You should get rid of the half way done part of the site till it is completely updated.
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Post May 15th, 2008, 8:19 am

i have updated the site drasticly with more images and information

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