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Post November 24th, 2004, 10:07 pm

Take it easy on me. I can tell it can get tough in here. The website just have alot of links and some comments from me and places to visit to even listen to a few songs etc.. there is videos and stuff.

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Post November 24th, 2004, 10:07 pm

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Post November 25th, 2004, 2:12 am

please add your url....thanx :lol:
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Post November 25th, 2004, 7:32 am

http://www.roberttrevino.com
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Post November 25th, 2004, 3:53 pm

No response means that my website sucks so bad you all are pittying me?

http://www.roberttrevino.com

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Post November 26th, 2004, 7:30 am

it dosnt seem to have any content. to me it just looks like you uploaded a template then maybe went to make a sandwich and forgot about it.
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Post November 26th, 2004, 7:33 am

meman wrote:
it dosnt seem to have any content. to me it just looks like you uploaded a template then maybe went to make a sandwich and forgot about it.


which page are you talking about? not the front page? it has all those links to go to other areas of my page.. help me here..a little more info please.. yeah it was a good sandwich.
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Post November 26th, 2004, 8:37 am

see it is a good site, but u need to tell us what it is about, or is it there i didnt read nuttin cuz i dont like reading, lmao, but it looks kool, could be better
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Post November 27th, 2004, 6:58 am

it all depends on what your needs are. if all you need is a small portfolio then it is find. you have a good template going but it needs balance. A fill logo at the top. But a website it is not. you need much more content.

My 2 Cents

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Post November 27th, 2004, 9:05 am

meman wrote:
it dosnt seem to have any content. to me it just looks like you uploaded a template then maybe went to make a sandwich and forgot about it.



it does not suck. you can change the name abit. i have a suggested website based on someone's name you can visit. this is a very successful bargain website with a forum. its called http://www.bensbargains.net look around it and see if you can borrow some ideas you can incorporate into your own. otherwise i like your site just fine, but it does not exp[lain to me clearly what you are about. think about making the text in the middle into a bulletted listing for beter impact(visual)..
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Post November 28th, 2004, 6:32 pm

Thank you for your opinion. I want to improve it and I needed help. Thanks.

Content... give me an idea..

http://www.roberttrevino.com
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Post November 28th, 2004, 6:46 pm

rtrev64 wrote:
Thank you for your opinion. I want to improve it and I needed help. Thanks.

Content... give me an idea..

http://www.roberttrevino.com


Content: Forums, Newsfeeds, Photos of your cat, Links, World or Local events, Book Club, Car Club, and others. Content is the reason people will come to your site.

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Post November 30th, 2004, 12:26 am

Umm, nice template....?

Pretend you don't know what you do and visit your site. Is is obvious what you do? Your site looks more like a corporate presence website than a video transfer company.

If you aren't that great at content, take your ideas to a newspaper writer and ask them to help. They are usually great at getting ideas across to the readers!
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Post November 30th, 2004, 11:35 am

I think your website has a nice template to it. My only gripes are that there doesn't seem to be enough content as stated in the above replies, and your title (where your name is) just seems to bland. I think there should be something more. I know this is a website for your business, but if you have personal information about yourself, your hobbies, family, etc. It should convey your personality and style as best it can. All in all it's a good website, it's just a little bland in places, and not enough content yet. Just my 2 cents.
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Post December 3rd, 2004, 8:56 pm

hey man cool site. I do have some tapes i want to convert. just email me man, but it is a very good site
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Post December 21st, 2004, 9:26 am

Wow! The animation is cool.

However can you 'loosen up' the spacing so your body of text is not so close to each other?
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