Site Review: WFL Launches

  • Genjamin
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Post 3+ Months Ago

Hey everyone, after months of work, with the little skill with photoshop that I have, I have completed a site for my friend. http://www.whiteleyforlife.com

please let me know what you think....good or bad
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Post 3+ Months Ago

This would probably be best existing in the Website Reviews forum rather than Website Design :)
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Post 3+ Months Ago

yep - and if you haven't compelted the required 3 quality reviews of
other sites, you will need to do so before you can receive any feedback
on your own.

//moved to reviews
  • Genjamin
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Post 3+ Months Ago

I thought I had completed the 3 required. It might have been a few months ago but I had done it.
  • Smokenjoe
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Post 3+ Months Ago

Nice web site. Its a little small, and kinda confusing(is this really a game?), but it has a nice layout. My only complaint is the background color. I look at white stuff all day, and I dont particularly want to do it when Im at home browsing the web. Maybe make the back ground a little darker. Otherwise, good job.
  • Foxy
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Post 3+ Months Ago

did u make those clouds urself by rendering and changing color hue, etc, or did u find a foto of clouds and cropped it -.-?

it looks very nice, I like it, whats with the gooogle ad on the bottom ^.-?

anyways, its very nice... why did it take you so long, its also very white :\
  • rtm223
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Post 3+ Months Ago

ooohhh check the text zoom. Text zoom breaks the entire layout of the site quite badly.

I also don't get the grey "thing" that stretches from the header to the footer on the left hand side. I thought this was a display glitch but it's the same on all browsers. It looks like a glich to me. Oh - it's just the front page where it looks wrong, it fits in with the rest of the pages.

It's a shame that your ads from google are stopping the page from stretching the full length of the page, as it is obviously intended. I assume those are put there by the server?

I agree with smokenjoe that it's a confusing site - I did spend a while wondering if it was genuine or not, then wondering if I was being dumb and then just getting confused. I guess that this was part of the idea though?

It is a nice layout, it has some little technical glitches but most people aren't half as picky as me.

Nice site, well done. I can't wait for the movie :wink:
  • Liquescence
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Post 3+ Months Ago

Bit confusing at first, but I'm thorougly amused.
  • Genjamin
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Post 3+ Months Ago

Hey thanks for all the tips everyone. I guess the sites main point point has come across well. To make people really think about what this is all about and totally confuse everyone. It's mainly a joke that my friend and I wanted to do so you can pretty much assume everything is fake besides the Film(s) TBA, and the music section. All of that will be genuine...if you call a crazy horrible rapper genuine...http://www.whiteleyforlife.com/Rapateer.mp3
  • Kashidom Nenakh
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Post 3+ Months Ago

Hey, pretty nice design, site and layout...

That' s someone I barelly have comments for...

Thumbs up...
Keep working...
  • Frostbyt3
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Post 3+ Months Ago

all images came up with the box and X [X] if you get what i mean? lol

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