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SITE REVIEW: WWW.JERUSALEMSTYLE.COM

Post October 30th, 2008, 1:22 am

Hello everybody,

This is our new website: http://jerusalemstyle.com , please have a constructive review!

Thanks for your great opinions in advanced!

Best Regards,

JerusalemStyle Team.
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Post October 31st, 2008, 10:07 am

i like it simple, smooth, web2 design style...
but i think orange is too shiny for banner...
good luck :)
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Post November 1st, 2008, 10:45 am

Seems well designed. Your banner is quite large compared to the size of your content. I would consider adding some header tags in your content section to separate your paragraphs and increase the overall size of that portion.

Also you have one 1 error in your html which you can see here

Other than that, the simple design is good and looks nice.
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Post November 2nd, 2008, 12:04 am

Hello,

The orange in the header needs to be softened a bit or changed to a different color but overall, nice website.

DW
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Post November 2nd, 2008, 3:12 am

Pretty good site, i dont like the gray behind the logo, it should be lighter, i think you are a web design company?.. well you should have a large Examples button, so people can look at your previous websites.
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Post November 3rd, 2008, 5:59 am

Nice idea for the header but it is too big takes over the whole site in my opinion. You don't have enough informaiton about what is on offer anyone wanting to purchase will have to contact you, they can't just sign up and pay. If you are offereing ecommerce solutions don't you think you should be using it yourself?

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Post November 3rd, 2008, 7:16 am

Like your design very much. Just put in some more describing images in the header (and content? )to make it great!

Post November 8th, 2008, 1:16 pm

Ok, Nice.

@Merlyn: Thanks, I corrected the HTML error, now it's valid.
@twistedgamez: Yes I know it's a MAC bug.. have you Safari?

I don't know why, but there is a bug with the color with SAFARI..
Check the logo with Safari, and with Firefox..

Does someone can help??
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Post November 10th, 2008, 11:20 pm

Hi
its well done congratulations. It didnt notice a link or mention about wthe it validates or not. Maybe thats the next task?

Additionally I didnt notice aany samples of previous works, that is somthing a lot of clients would be interested in. If you just started out, you could make temnlates or mock ups and present those as samples.

Good work.

Sami

Post November 20th, 2008, 7:00 am

@sambkk: Thank you Sami,

Now it's done I put the "validate link" in this page:
http://jerusalemstyle.com/webdesign
I don't want to put it on the home page, because the icon aren't so beautiful, and I make very attention to make my website "Light" and beautiful.
And for the templates, you're right... I hope to make this soon.

And nobody know something about the bug with Mac and pictures??

Post November 22nd, 2008, 10:53 am

Really nice design... like the site a lot. Very simple and very direct... only thing - the font - it isn't as sophisticated as the rest of the site.

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Post November 23rd, 2008, 3:11 pm

Unfortunately I don't really like it and I'll try to explain why.
1. The logo is terrible, looks like it was made in MS Paint or something.
2. Stock images are boring and don't communicate anything.
3. Have you made any other sites, where's the portfolio?
4. Boring...

To many people on this forum either have very little aesthetic or just patronize the other other members with 'looks good'

Sorry its ugly and looks like it was made 5 years ago.

It validates strict, which is great.
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Post December 13th, 2008, 3:53 pm

jerusalemstyle wrote:
Hello everybody,

This is our new website: http://jerusalemstyle.com , Please have a constructive review!

Thanks for your great opinions in advance!

Best Regards,

JerusalemStyle Team.


Well, at first glance, I like your website. Probably, you should modify your logo (the lion is so ugly!) I like the bound corners and the tree. Maybe, when you expand a branch, and use another one, it must be expanded, as well. You have to check your code. There are 5 mistakes ( http://validator.w3.org/check?uri=http: ... style.com/ ) Try to get more backlinks and reduces the speed of the charge.

How long is your website?

I hope to help you.

Post January 5th, 2009, 8:22 am

Thanks everybody,
My website is 3 month long.

For the Validation, it's strange because I have a valid result:
http://validator.w3.org/check?uri=http: ... style.com/
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Post January 6th, 2009, 9:02 pm

Nice site. My only problem is the navigation on the left, the links looks a bit incomplete, tacky?, somehow.
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