SITE REVIEW: WWW.JERUSALEMSTYLE.COM

  • jerusalemstyle
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Post 3+ Months Ago

Hello everybody,

This is our new website: http://jerusalemstyle.com , please have a constructive review!

Thanks for your great opinions in advanced!

Best Regards,

JerusalemStyle Team.
  • bobboken
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Post 3+ Months Ago

i like it simple, smooth, web2 design style...
but i think orange is too shiny for banner...
good luck :)
  • Merlyn
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Post 3+ Months Ago

Seems well designed. Your banner is quite large compared to the size of your content. I would consider adding some header tags in your content section to separate your paragraphs and increase the overall size of that portion.

Also you have one 1 error in your html which you can see here

Other than that, the simple design is good and looks nice.
  • danceweb
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Post 3+ Months Ago

Hello,

The orange in the header needs to be softened a bit or changed to a different color but overall, nice website.

DW
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Post 3+ Months Ago

Pretty good site, i dont like the gray behind the logo, it should be lighter, i think you are a web design company?.. well you should have a large Examples button, so people can look at your previous websites.
  • paul8368
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Nice idea for the header but it is too big takes over the whole site in my opinion. You don't have enough informaiton about what is on offer anyone wanting to purchase will have to contact you, they can't just sign up and pay. If you are offereing ecommerce solutions don't you think you should be using it yourself?

Paul
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Post 3+ Months Ago

Like your design very much. Just put in some more describing images in the header (and content? )to make it great!
  • jerusalemstyle
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Post 3+ Months Ago

Ok, Nice.

@Merlyn: Thanks, I corrected the HTML error, now it's valid.
@twistedgamez: Yes I know it's a MAC bug.. have you Safari?

I don't know why, but there is a bug with the color with SAFARI..
Check the logo with Safari, and with Firefox..

Does someone can help??
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Post 3+ Months Ago

Hi
its well done congratulations. It didnt notice a link or mention about wthe it validates or not. Maybe thats the next task?

Additionally I didnt notice aany samples of previous works, that is somthing a lot of clients would be interested in. If you just started out, you could make temnlates or mock ups and present those as samples.

Good work.

Sami
  • jerusalemstyle
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Post 3+ Months Ago

@sambkk: Thank you Sami,

Now it's done I put the "validate link" in this page:
http://jerusalemstyle.com/webdesign
I don't want to put it on the home page, because the icon aren't so beautiful, and I make very attention to make my website "Light" and beautiful.
And for the templates, you're right... I hope to make this soon.

And nobody know something about the bug with Mac and pictures??
  • theCulturePhile
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Post 3+ Months Ago

Really nice design... like the site a lot. Very simple and very direct... only thing - the font - it isn't as sophisticated as the rest of the site.

-pk
  • transitmedia
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Unfortunately I don't really like it and I'll try to explain why.
1. The logo is terrible, looks like it was made in MS Paint or something.
2. Stock images are boring and don't communicate anything.
3. Have you made any other sites, where's the portfolio?
4. Boring...

To many people on this forum either have very little aesthetic or just patronize the other other members with 'looks good'

Sorry its ugly and looks like it was made 5 years ago.

It validates strict, which is great.
  • urko1982
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Post 3+ Months Ago

jerusalemstyle wrote:
Hello everybody,

This is our new website: http://jerusalemstyle.com , Please have a constructive review!

Thanks for your great opinions in advance!

Best Regards,

JerusalemStyle Team.


Well, at first glance, I like your website. Probably, you should modify your logo (the lion is so ugly!) I like the bound corners and the tree. Maybe, when you expand a branch, and use another one, it must be expanded, as well. You have to check your code. There are 5 mistakes ( http://validator.w3.org/check?uri=http: ... style.com/ ) Try to get more backlinks and reduces the speed of the charge.

How long is your website?

I hope to help you.
  • jerusalemstyle
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Post 3+ Months Ago

Thanks everybody,
My website is 3 month long.

For the Validation, it's strange because I have a valid result:
http://validator.w3.org/check?uri=http: ... style.com/
  • theBruney
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Post 3+ Months Ago

Nice site. My only problem is the navigation on the left, the links looks a bit incomplete, tacky?, somehow.
  • ayelletkod
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where is the portfolio? i couldnt find examples.
  • jerusalemstyle
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ok, the website, is up for just 3months ago, so it's a little short for a Portfolio.
But I think that I will not put a portfolio anyway because I don't like people can see my clients.. It's a private information I think...
  • jerusalemstyle
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Ok, I updated my menu on the left. And I create a Blog.
What elses?
  • mhammadd
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I think I will start with the colors you used on the site. Even though every person has their own taste, I personally think that the combination is very poor. The colors are so bright that they draw my attention from the content.

Another thing is that I couldn't find a portfolio. With web design as one of the products you offer, it would be nice to let your visitor see some of your work.

Also, to protect you from getting lots of spam mail, I advice that you remove your email address from the contact page especially when there is already a mailing form.
  • SiteFlipGuru
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Nice looking site!
  • LightningRider
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Post 3+ Months Ago

Very nicely designed website: bravo. HTML is all good too.
There is only one thing I see. On your hosting page, the graph makes me think it is a graph of your uptime. Other than that it is perfect. :)
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Post 3+ Months Ago

jerusalemstyle wrote:
Hello everybody,

This is our new website: http://jerusalemstyle.com , please have a constructive review!

Thanks for your great opinions in advanced!

Best Regards,

JerusalemStyle Team.



I like it, it just feels like if there is something missing, but I am not sure what.
  • krates
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Post 3+ Months Ago

good work done.. you can get the middle part done in flash to make it more attractive..
  • alex0811
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I don't like the green leaf picture.
  • jerusalemstyle
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I don't like Flash on website, I prefer it clean.
  • davidcoh26
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Post 3+ Months Ago

I like the green leaf picture ;-)
Maybe you don't like Flash, but the Tag Cloud is very cool.

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