SITE REVIEW: www.mobilegods.com

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Post 3+ Months Ago

hey guys,

I think this is my nicest and fastest project so far( 4 days). Give me some comments, and try not to be too nice :!:

http://www.mobilegods.com
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Post 3+ Months Ago

theres a random 6 near the nbc banner.
a tilde near the 2 on the main page
and your page name is blank.
*this isnt a review, just make sure you fix those before someone reviews the site.
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Post 3+ Months Ago

I would suggest try and insert some better images which are clear and attractive, also change the font..

You have wasted alot of space on the site..
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Post 3+ Months Ago

when looking at your code, i see you used yahoo site builder. try and move away from that and hand-code the site or if you really want wysiwyg, try an actual standalone editor. also, dont be limited in the content you offer by the images provided to you by yahoo.
btw, that 6 has changed to a 17. is that some sort of "hit-counter"?
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yep, from statcounter
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how do i change the page name from blan to something else?
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nvm i found out
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Ok, I won't be nice... lol. The page is getting there but the way that you have the pictures, screensaves and videos inside of Top downloads just seems a bit awkward, to me they'd look better outside of that Top Downloads container.

Another this is that animation that you have going around the page... it pisses me off. If you like it and you really think it's cool then atleast provide a button or something to turn it off.
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I found the man running around the screen really annoying as well. You also had spelling errors. You mispelled "because", which makes it look really amateur. That said, I do like your images and the overall layout of the site. My site needs a lot of work as well, so I won't be too harsh. Best of luck.

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Give me some comments, http://www.leathermaster.com.pk
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Post 3+ Months Ago

its latest project of mind
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i dont know how to take out the freak, im sure it anoyes me more then u at the moment!
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Well, I didn't really like it. The colors are quite uncoordinated, the topic is absolutley of no one's mere interest. And oh my you could use some buttons instead of the unattractive, static links.

Sorry for being harsh... But that's what I think, and why do you have so many ads?!
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alright so i completely changed the theme and made buttons, i put so ads to fill up the page up abit, it looks rly empty without them. And does anybudy think its a subject of no1s interest?( usually when i want a wallpaper for my comp i lookup cellphone backgrounds, their nice)
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Big improvement from the last time I viewed the site. I also like what you did with the ends of the horizontal bars... looks good.
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Thje overall site design is prety nice, I think it coul;d do with lightening up a little. also maybe it looks a little blocky, other than that good work!
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alright guys thanks for all the oponions, for those who have seen my site since i first posted this topic it has changed alot, and for the better i think

But im still having alot of trouble making the homepage, I fill it up with ads,
I have some ringtones at the top right corner, top downloads in the middle, some ads to fill up the uppder and left side of the page, and of course on the left i have the navigation.What else, look at the big white gaps between each other,

is there a different background color you suggest?
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I don't care for the blue hyperlinks on green buttons - you might want to pick a better colour for the links. And what is up with the google ad in a scroll box? You could just use the "Link Unit" ads instead of the "Ad Unit" ads.
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i wanted to make it look like a navigation button so people will click on it
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The colour scheme is awful..

The problem with wysiwyg editors is that they produce bloated/*plum* code. If you're new to html try using an editor like dreamweaver using coding view then preview it in a browser.

Honestly while this "hand coded" option might sound tricky to start with, at the end of the day you'll become a much better coder for it.
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well it just got indexed in yahoo. i have another site that looks way better and has better content but is not indexed, ill use this website to crawl my other websites.
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mafiaboy3 wrote:
well it just got indexed in yahoo. i have another site that looks way better and has better content but is not indexed, ill use this website to crawl my other websites.


every site is going to get indexed.. so don't take that as an indication that the website is any good or that yahoo will rate it highly in rankings.
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i dont know what color to put for the buttons! If i put some light color people cant see it, apart from light colors, blue purple n red don't look to good. What color!?
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mafiaboy3 wrote:
i dont know what color to put for the buttons! If i put some light color people cant see it, apart from light colors, blue purple n red don't look to good. What color!?


Looks like you need to develope an understanding of colour theory. Do some searches on the topic. Another way is to seek out other good websites and learn from the colour schemes they use.

To start with, try using 2 complimentary colours, say white and blue, and limit your website strictly to these 2 and slight variations (opacity changes) of them to add depth.
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Post 3+ Months Ago

thnx
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i LIKE THE WEBSITE A LOT. Although I do think it could use a different color scheme. Too much going on with the colors. Choose about three that go well with eachother and stick with them. Friendly advise!
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Your website have an horrible design man. Search in google for free css skins and use them.
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ye i changed design drasticily, its not done on some pages tho
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yeah the background colours are better, but the buttons & the bubble effects are still really ugly.
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any good place where i could get some good buttons!

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