SITE REVIEW: www.musicbooksforschoolteachers.com

  • SportsNarrative
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Post 3+ Months Ago

Hello everyone!

Here is a site I designed for someone:

http://www.musicbooksforschoolteachers.com

Please take a look. I appreciate any specific comments and related suggestions.

Cheers.
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  • iceforever.diamonds
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Post 3+ Months Ago

The design of your site is quite simple and you need to add some features like online learning.
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Post 3+ Months Ago

Okay, your site layout is quite simple.

It's HTML valid which is good.

For looks, you have a lot of text with little separation between.

I would suggest for aesthetics using some lines or more breaks to separate some of your content.

Other than that, it's pretty simple and straightforward. Good Job.
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Post 3+ Months Ago

Hi,

I think you have a clear purpose - which is great. What is your company name? Is it on the site?

I like your use of benefits statements - good marketing stuff. Basically it looks like a good basic site that should work, as long as people can find it. How do you get the word out about the site?

One sorta technical thing - I notice that your email addresses are straight in the HTML code on the contact page. I would suggest either putting them in an image, or using an email hiding system - otherwise SPAM-BOTs will find them and SPAM you.

Best wishes,

Kat
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Post 3+ Months Ago

The layout is easy to follow...I agree with pp's that the design is pretty basic, but the site achieves it's purpose.

When I first looked at the site, I wasn't sure what the site was all about. Is it web resources for teachers? It wasn't clear immediately that it is info about a book. I would suggest adding something to that effect at the top of the page.

Maybe something that will grab readers' attention, like "The Most Valuable Resource Available for your Primary or Junior Music Program".

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