SITE REVIEW: www.niecynash.com

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Post 3+ Months Ago

Hi all. I did these a while ago and I really want to add more "polish" to them before I submit for consideration. Can I get some opinions. Keep in mind the site will be all Flash.

http://designerschair.com/Isaiah/WIP/Im ... out_1b.jpg

http://designerschair.com/Isaiah/WIP/Im ... lash_b.jpg

http://designerschair.com/Isaiah/WIP/Im ... out_1a.jpg

This is a secondary practice comp. Before anyone says it, I "borrowed" the concept from another site I saw. So I can't take full credit. I was just bored and thought it would be a good exercise to copy something I like and try to personalize it. Especially seeing as to how I don't have much pay work on the table right now. Just to build my skills. The layout is completely fictitious and I don't plan on using it anytime soon. Here it is?

http://designerschair.com/Isaiah/WIP/Im ... prings.jpg
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I'm a little confused on what your asking, but I liked the second (splash page). The first looked as if you were at a loss for words, maybe add some more text to fill in the empty space. As for the Colorado layout...that's where I'm confused. Do you want to know if we like that too? Well it looks good, but its a little to dark for me, but the transparency and actual layout look good. Hope that helps.
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Well I wanted a critique on it, but it's just an exercise. It won't be a site. Just my playing around with a few different techniques.
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well it looks like it needs just a bit more work, but other than that, its great.
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Ah, I see. Well the layouts look very good. Especially the splash page.

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