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Post December 4th, 2007, 1:37 pm

Hey Everyone,

I had completed the above site a while ago but was curious what people might think about it. I am pondering some revisions pushing for more CSS and a few other ideas. Designing for such a limited amount of data is a bit difficult if you are trying to incorporate SEO techniques. Any feed back would be great ... I am going to revise that in the near future as my main project, and as a side one now when I get tired of programming the java search engine :)

Address: http://www.swanzeyselfstorage.com

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Post December 4th, 2007, 1:40 pm

As an FYI ... I know the title is too low in Fire Fox ... I have not had time to alter the CSS with the programming I need to do.
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Post December 4th, 2007, 2:29 pm

Hey,

Not a bad start but a huge amount you can improve on. I don't wish to be cruel but I'm going to assume you're relatively new to this :?: A couple of quickies, I'm sure others will add more.

1. Put your javascript in a separate file.

2. It is far far far....... harder to design an attractive website that is scalable in size. Not impossible, but a lot harder than using a static width. I prefer 800x600 centered. I think you'd be best adopting this approach.

Good luck.

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Post December 4th, 2007, 3:30 pm

I agree on the fixed dimensions as well.

I'm don't know exactly what it is, but the color schemes just aren't really doing it for me. I think if you used the adobe kuler and experimented with it for a bit you could find something really good.

Another thing I would fix is kind of trivial, but the nav buttons on the left, if you are on the home page, have the the home button not be a link, and the same for the other pages. Thats just something that is kind of nice to do, even though it doesn't change the functionality at all.
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Post December 4th, 2007, 8:42 pm

Thank you for the responses so far ....

1) Java Script - I can definately move that to another file, shouldn't be too bad to do.

2) I have actually been doing this for about 3 years with a 2-3 year gap in the middle. I am required to do full page width ... I do not have a choice in the matter, what the president wants, the president gets, I can try to change his ways though. I have about 90% control of the page, as long as they like it, I am good to go. I will see what I can do about static width, but you are right, static widths are a lot nicer to use .... I am beefing up my CSS skills so hopefully it can be redone that way and alot more static ....

3) I like the button idea .... adopting that one seems like a good idea and keep the color change.

4) Color Scheme - Again it comes down to the president .... I will play around with it when I can, but it is another point that is well taken.

I will add these ideas to my things to do list for the site ... I know it is in need of a redesign, considering I brought it from a one page site to this its a huge advancement for the site, but no where near perfection.

The more comments the merrier!

Thank you all!
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Post December 19th, 2007, 11:20 am

I have updated the site and followed the several of the suggestions.

If anyone notices any other improvements/comments feel free to say it.

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Post December 19th, 2007, 12:03 pm

It looks better. Have you ever played with round corners on you div's? check this out: http://www.w3.org/Style/Examples/007/roundshadow
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Post December 19th, 2007, 8:06 pm

I'll check it out tomorrow at work. Thanks.

The hardest part of stripping it of all of the tables,(except where I had data to put in tables) was making the boxes border properly. FireFox read it all nicely but IE only accepted certain things and percentages for table width took the window width and cancelled my border.

The rounded div boxes would be a nice touch.

I tried disabling the links when you are on a certain page, but it killed all of my roll over imaging.

I know it is not perfect yet but next step for me is tackling the image_header and making it a background that is scalable and an image. It unfortunately can not be static .... if it could this design would be a bit easier.

Anyone else have other thoughts on the page?
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Post December 19th, 2007, 10:56 pm

I remember that this website had a review several months ago ... strange ... I can't find any trace of it, but I'm adamant that I've reviewed it here before ...

And it hasn't changed a bit ...
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Post December 20th, 2007, 5:35 am

I visited your web site. Just a few comments.

1. Your banner looks dark and void. I would redesign and full encompass the banner with the existing picture in the banner. AND possible lighten it up a bit.

2. JMHO I would delete the date out of the menu , serves no purpose.

3. You need alt tags on your images. Here is a site to explain alt tags.

http://www.searchengines.com/alttags.html

4. I would ditch the hit counter..Why? Most hit counters only count how many times a page has been accessed, not how many unique visitors it has had. If one person visits the same page 10 times, that's not 10 different people. Hit counters are basically useless and they make a site look amateurish. You don't want to give people the wrong impression, especially if you have a business site. I would use site stats. Here is a fairly good one.

http://www.websitetrafficreport.com/

5. I would implement a contact form for my potential customers.

6. You have a nice clean site that is fast loading and consistent. The above comments are JMO on good web design.
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Post December 20th, 2007, 6:07 am

Breeze,

I have only posted this page on this one link so I follow the rules ... it is referenced under a CSS question I had on the design forum but did not see any comments there from you either .... so I don't know what to tell you. I didn't delete any so unsure what happened.

The site does look very similar, but I moved it over from tables setting up everything to CSS, which I am learning the design end of.

Dodger,

The banner was giving me problems, and I am working on lightening it up. Unfortunately the rounded corners don't work in FF 2.0.0.11 ... so looking for a new route but one is coming.

I am going to keep the date there, granted it is just there for looks, I like having a quick reference to the date when on a page, it saves me from looking at the computer calendar.

I thought I got the alt tags in on all my buttons .... but will check. And the others I just spaced.

Hit counter was to see if my SEO terms were working and it got plenty of hits so, good call on deleting it. We have netstats and I use google analytics and combine the results ...

Thanks for the comments!
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Post December 20th, 2007, 12:06 pm

The design it's poor.
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Post December 20th, 2007, 1:36 pm

kbergmann wrote:
I moved it over from tables setting up everything to CSS, which I am learning the design end of.


Ah, I get you now :D

alopes wrote:
The design it's poor.


Alopes, you should be explaining why you think the design is poor.
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Post December 20th, 2007, 3:05 pm

Breeze wrote:

alopes wrote:
The design it's poor.


Alopes, you should be explaining why you think the design is poor.


Breeze,

Alopes had done that to another review as well. This leads me to believe he made the comment to simply get his page posted ...

Also, I am working on reworking the whole design, I first need to make IE and FF view the same way, that is why the header is simply black behind the banner picture. It keeps on displaying wrong in IE. I think I found a solution though. The custom CSS design is easy to pick up but difficult to fine tune I have found. I am going to keep on upgrading this site before my others so I have a better grasp of CSS page formatting and limited use of tables for data only.
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Post December 20th, 2007, 3:26 pm

alopes wrote:
The design it's poor.


Very enlightening ... why is it "poor" :?:

/me ignores this "helpful" comment :)
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