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  • priyanka-m6.net
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Hi,
Good work,
But I am finding the site somewhat crowded. Instead of putting all those book links on the home page, you could put one special buy option on the homepage which opens other page where all those books are listed.
  • mr_darek
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Good work,
But I am finding the site somewhat crowded.


Definitely. There is no hierarchy or any structure whatsoever....if Pollock did web, this is what his work would be like. :wink:

The site needs to be taken to the drawing board in the sense that it just has to be thought-out more efficiently. Establish a more thorough layout and everything should fall into place as you have plent of content.
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ok - i've changed it...any thoughts any one? am getting paranoid that it's really bad as i've had 35 views to this post and only 2 replies...thanks for any feedback...
  • Indulge
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Hm...
I agree...it feels very crowded, too many different colors for me. Text could be a bit smaller and the Eye doesn't really know what to focus on. ....
This needs to be redone completely...I would say...
  • katana
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ow! it hurts my eyes! I'm with the other guys - the layout has to be overhauled if you want a more professional look. make the layout simpler and more structured. I would also remove the images from the title section - design a logo of your own incorporating an image and some stylised text using photoshop or something similar.

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